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Autumn Vii

gravel-strewn steps
confront ageing legs -
path to secret
love-nest blocked -
let's just cuddle here

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/30/2016 1:29:00 PM

oh this is REALLY cute!!

David De La Croes
Date: 5/30/2016 1:36:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. I appreciate your visit and comment. Cheers, David

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/30/2016 7:05:00 AM

Pondering...

David De La Croes
Date: 5/30/2016 7:35:00 AM

Thanks for your "pondering", Kim. This poem is about how the storms of life impacts on the ageing process, and also the (secret) memories of past passion, and the appreciation of being embraced by loved ones. Be well, David