Autumn Vi

wet shadows
on misty morning -
lonely trees 
have cried
all night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Rodrigues Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 7:06 AM
Lovely Autumn poems! Will be following your posts. 7
De La Croes Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 8:09 AM
Thank you, Kim. It's autumn here in the Southern hemisphere. I have visited some of your poems (and will continue to do so), and find it very inspiring. Greetings, David
Allison Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 2:57 AM
Oh David this is very beautiful I have never tried a modern tanka before:-) hugs Jan xx
De La Croes Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 3:24 AM
Thank you, Jan! I find that the modern forms of tanka provide space for modulation which cannot be achieve in a short form of haiku, which I really love. Be well, David
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