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Autumn Vi

wet shadows on misty morning - lonely trees have cried all night

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/30/2016 7:06:00 AM

Lovely Autumn poems! Will be following your posts. 7

David De La Croes
Date: 5/30/2016 8:09:00 AM

Thank you, Kim. It's autumn here in the Southern hemisphere. I have visited some of your poems (and will continue to do so), and find it very inspiring. Greetings, David

Jan Allison

Date: 5/30/2016 2:57:00 AM

Oh David this is very beautiful I have never tried a modern tanka before:-) hugs Jan xx

David De La Croes
Date: 5/30/2016 3:24:00 AM

Thank you, Jan! I find that the modern forms of tanka provide space for modulation which cannot be achieve in a short form of haiku, which I really love. Be well, David