Autumn Unfurls

Winds whirl
          Leaves swirl

          Crisp twirls
          Fall's pearls
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Gauthier Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 10:17 PM
delightful ~
Rodrigues Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 6:50 PM
That last line makes for a pretty picture!
Wolf Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 7:45 PM
Thanks for the sweet comment, Kim. Honey and Molasses, gw
Watt Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 3:55 PM
These eight words speak volumes about autumn. Well done, enjoyed very much!
Wolf Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 5:01 PM
Thank you so much, John. I'm trying to keep the leaves of Poetry Soup's album crisp and sweet. Keep smiling, Gershon
Bauer Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 1:10 PM
This made me smile, Gershon!
Wolf Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 5:02 PM
Now you too, ilene, will be one of Fall's Pearls, flashing your 'pearly whites.' Go, girl! Cheers, Gershon
Krutsinger Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 12:05 PM
I was looking forward to your autumn footle, and I am not disappointed.
Wolf Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 5:03 PM
Glad to hear that I didn't let you down, Caren. Now, just wait for the extra-special edition of my 'Fall-Expressway-Construction Footle.' lol. Thanks, Gershon
Gentile Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 3:53 AM
Your Footie is chilly, keep it warm!! Great imagery Gershon in so few words !!
Wolf Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 5:04 PM
I guess I typed this Footle before the screen de-thawed. Next-time, I'll use a little 'De-Icer.' ~ gw
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