Autumn Unfurls

Winds whirl Leaves swirl Crisp twirls Fall's pearls

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Line Gauthier

Date: 10/25/2021 10:17:00 PM

delightful ~

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/21/2021 6:50:00 PM

That last line makes for a pretty picture!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/21/2021 7:45:00 PM

Thanks for the sweet comment, Kim. Honey and Molasses, gw

John Watt

Date: 10/21/2021 3:55:00 PM

These eight words speak volumes about autumn. Well done, enjoyed very much!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/21/2021 5:01:00 PM

Thank you so much, John. I'm trying to keep the leaves of Poetry Soup's album crisp and sweet. Keep smiling, Gershon

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/21/2021 1:10:00 PM

This made me smile, Gershon!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/21/2021 5:02:00 PM

Now you too, ilene, will be one of Fall's Pearls, flashing your 'pearly whites.' Go, girl! Cheers, Gershon

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/21/2021 12:05:00 PM

I was looking forward to your autumn footle, and I am not disappointed.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/21/2021 5:03:00 PM

Glad to hear that I didn't let you down, Caren. Now, just wait for the extra-special edition of my 'Fall-Expressway-Construction Footle.' lol. Thanks, Gershon

Mike Gentile

Date: 10/21/2021 3:53:00 AM

Your Footie is chilly, keep it warm!! Great imagery Gershon in so few words !!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/21/2021 5:04:00 PM

I guess I typed this Footle before the screen de-thawed. Next-time, I'll use a little 'De-Icer.' ~ gw