Nette Onclaud Poet Haiku

Autumn Twinkles

crystal flakes twinkle

through autumn's bare canopy...

leaves sparkling in the dark



yellow the tree's hues

painting attic of churchyard...

like fall's innocence





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Skat's Autumn Haiku
10/23/2015

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Sara Kendrick November 1, 2015 at 3:38 PM Autumns come and autumns go but this work will stand forever!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara

Emile Pinet October 30, 2015 at 8:37 AM You graphically depict your version of Autumn as your poetic licence allowes you to envision it in all it's beauty. Congratulations on your win, Emile.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 30, 2015 at 4:43 AM Wonderful haiku nette n so is the win!Big congrats!

Andrea Dietrich October 29, 2015 at 4:50 PM so lovely. Congrats on the great win.

David Mohn October 28, 2015 at 10:33 AM Terrific Nette...the 2nd one is pure magic :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 28, 2015 at 8:28 AM Big congratulations on Skats contest!!! great imagery!~Olive Eloisa =`)

Balveen Cheema October 28, 2015 at 7:02 AM Congrats on your win, Nette!

Michael Tor October 28, 2015 at 6:57 AM Congratulations on your win Nette.

Arlene Smith October 28, 2015 at 5:28 AM Congrats on a great win!!.. Beautiful!!... :-)

Skat A October 28, 2015 at 1:11 AM Nette, I'm pleased to have read every haiku on this page. Congratulations on your awesome Autumn win. **SKAT**

Eve Roper October 28, 2015 at 12:53 AM Beautiful visual, Nette, congratulations on your win!

Daver Austin October 27, 2015 at 11:38 AM Especially like the first one, the way it sets an autumn scene, the "bare canopy." love, daver

Monterey Sirak October 27, 2015 at 7:37 AM You painted stirring images with your pen as a brush! Beautiful!

Paul Callus October 25, 2015 at 11:34 AM Both your images are a treat to read, Nette, but allow me to name the second one as my favourite! #7 Hugs // paul

Robert Lindley October 24, 2015 at 7:40 PM Image feast and brain food my friend! Super 7 from me.. A7

Michael Tor October 23, 2015 at 8:08 AM Nice entry nette. Enjoyed reading.

Lyva Marty October 22, 2015 at 11:11 PM Magnificent! Your words paint a beautiful picture, the imagery, perfectly attuned with the senses.Amazing scene in art.

Eileen Manassian October 22, 2015 at 10:50 PM Oh...how amazing is this, Nette! Love it. Twinkle...gleaming...beautiful feel. Good luck, dear. Hugs