Autumn Trees

On autumn trees the garnet leaves amass
Predestined flocks of birds to there alight
Quiescent in stiff gusts of October
Rosaceous in the sun's reclusive rays

Silent butterflies pirouette to earth


1st Place(tie)
Let's Do Some Alphabet Contest
Sponsor:  Sara Kenfrick
9/30/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 6:09 AM
Congratulations on your great win, Dale.
Cozart Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 8:18 AM
Thanks so much!
Barden Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 10:37 PM
Sincere congratulations on your well-deserved win, Dale - blessings and keep up the great work! :-)
Kendrick Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 3:20 PM
I can see the autumn scene from your poem's description..I enjoyed reading it..Thanks for participating in my contest.Sara
Cozart Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 3:26 PM
My pleasure, Sara.
Cresswell Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 11:34 AM
thank you for this beauty.
Cozart Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 11:38 AM
Thank you!
Sergi Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 6:11 PM
A beautiful autumn scene, Dale! Good Luck
Cozart Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 6:30 PM
Thanks, Ralph.
Krampe Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 4:44 PM
Beautiful autumn image, Dale.
Cozart Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 5:01 PM
Thanks, Agnes.
Allison Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 2:02 PM
am absolute gem Dale such beautiful lines, good luck with the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Cozart Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 2:47 PM
Thanks, Jan!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 10:31 PM
Rosaceous... my favorite line!
Cozart Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 8:33 AM
Thanks, Kim!
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 7:52 PM
Big applause for this little gem Dale! I love the way you compare the falling leaves to butterflies. : )
Cozart Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 8:23 PM
Thanks, Connie!
Sands Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 5:43 PM
Very nicely written Dale :)
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