autumn trees

amber autumn trees
appear leafless and lifeless ~
longing for winter

Poetry Wheel Challenge:

Theme: Change
Emotion: Longing
Color: Amber
Season: Autumn
Form: Haiku
Object: Leaf
Verb: Fall

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Gibbons Avatar
September 22, 2026 at 3:32 PM
Magnificent autumn 🍂 haiku dear tania my fav season for changing colours but feel sorry for the naked trees I just have to hug them more 🤗 a great wheel challenge a fav 😉for me 🌹hugzzz 🫂 friend
George Avatar
September 22, 2026 at 12:11 AM
The trees are too tired and almost burnt in the sweltering heat. Though they wait for winter, can they get their crowns back? it's possible only in spring. Great haiku.
Kitchin Avatar
September 22, 2026 at 2:38 AM
Valsa, thank you.
Cunningham Avatar
September 22, 2026 at 12:03 AM
After a scorching summer in the uk and Italy ,I'm more than ready for a bit of autumnal weather. Good luck in challenge Tania. Tom
Kitchin Avatar
September 22, 2026 at 2:38 AM
Tom, thank you.
Delegans Avatar
September 21, 2026 at 9:11 PM
My Favorite season! Nicely done fitting everything in from the wheel. Great poem, Tania.
Kitchin Avatar
September 22, 2026 at 2:39 AM
Christopher, thank you.
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