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Autumn Time

Particular smell of autumnal season Wind brings from under the dark leaves White cranes and other migrator fill the fields And yellow sparrows follow the shepherds Some trees have begun to take off their green clothes The sky is covered with autumn clouds Goodbye summer, see you after nine months

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Date: 9/21/2024 8:49:00 AM
Dear Abdullah, my poet friend, your autumn time is beautifully expressed. Your vivid natural imagery brings me to the center of this scene with poetic ease and finesse. A wistful last line for a lovely finale. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Abdullah Alhemaidy
Date: 9/21/2024 12:02:00 PM
Thank you so much dear lovely sweet Susan. It is my pleasure to read you :-) Best regards and respect ~ AA

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