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Autumn Sway


                      Autumn Sway

golden leaves in flight
chilly breeze whirls through the trees
sunshine fades away
rancid scent hangs in the air
autumn firmly holds its sway.
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Dietrich Avatar
September 19, 2025 at 4:02 PM
Back with Big congrats
Guptar Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 8:26 AM
Thank you so much.
Miller Avatar
September 18, 2025 at 1:22 AM
Excellent tanka on autumn, congratulations
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September 19, 2025 at 1:40 AM
Thank you poet friend for appreciating the above poem and for your kind wishes. Cheers
Sharma Avatar
September 18, 2025 at 1:10 AM
Autumn in its glory is here indeed!! Congrats!!
Guptar Avatar
September 19, 2025 at 1:42 AM
Thank you Vandana for appreciating the above poem and for your kind wishes. Have a pleasant day.
Dietrich Avatar
September 17, 2025 at 8:54 PM
Very well done and excellent end line
Guptar Avatar
September 19, 2025 at 1:38 AM
Thank you dear poetess. Cheers.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 16, 2025 at 6:20 AM
Beautiful! Each line brings a new layer!
Guptar Avatar
September 16, 2025 at 8:27 AM
Thank you for appreciating the above write. Cheers.
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