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Autumn Stroll

Autumn crunches under foot blowing wind emerges sending ground rodents scurrying new fall. Copyright © 2015 By Caryl S. Muzzey

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Date: 1/31/2016 5:11:00 PM
A Wonderful Cinquain, Caryl. A crisp Visual with much impact.
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Caryl Muzzey
Date: 2/3/2016 11:40:00 AM
Thank you Elaine for stopping by. Rodents was the first thing that popped into my head when thinking about fall, I watch them all the time from by back porch when the air starts turning cold . I'm glad you enjoyed~ Caryl
Date: 1/3/2016 10:58:00 AM
Definitely a 7! Great work !!!
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Caryl Muzzey
Date: 2/3/2016 11:36:00 AM
Thank you Hansteven for stopping by, I'm glad you enjoyed it~ Caryl
Date: 11/3/2015 2:14:00 PM
inventive... rodents of all things, caryl.. well done!..huggs
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Caryl Muzzey
Date: 11/3/2015 2:24:00 PM
Thank you Nette for stopping by. Caryl

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