Autumn Stroll

Autumn
crunches under foot
blowing wind emerges
sending ground rodents scurrying
new fall.

Copyright © 2015 By Caryl S. Muzzey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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George   Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 5:11 PM
A Wonderful Cinquain, Caryl. A crisp Visual with much impact.
Muzzey Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 11:40 AM
Thank you Elaine for stopping by. Rodents was the first thing that popped into my head when thinking about fall, I watch them all the time from by back porch when the air starts turning cold . I'm glad you enjoyed~ Caryl
Selfa Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 10:58 AM
Definitely a 7! Great work !!!
Muzzey Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 11:36 AM
Thank you Hansteven for stopping by, I'm glad you enjoyed it~ Caryl
Onclaud Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 2:14 PM
inventive... rodents of all things, caryl.. well done!..huggs
Muzzey Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 2:24 PM
Thank you Nette for stopping by. Caryl
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