Laura Leiser Poet Cinquain

Autumn Stroll

strolling
                         old cracked sidewalks
                             brownstone, pumpkin lined streets
                      wood burning smoke rises over
                  fall skies











Written on 10/21/2015

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Skat A October 29, 2015 at 9:08 PM Laura, Congratulations on your "Autumn Stroll win." Love SKAT

Kim Merryman October 28, 2015 at 9:55 PM A lovely "city" view of autumn, Laura. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim Laura Leiser October 29, 2015 at 1:54 PM Yes, I wanted a different spin on this, and I'm glad you liked it, Kim :)

Janice Canerdy October 28, 2015 at 9:27 AM This is lovely, Laura! Congratulations on your win. Janice Laura Leiser October 29, 2015 at 1:53 PM Thank you, Janice, and thank you :)

James Inman October 27, 2015 at 8:32 AM Nice take on the theme. So many very lovely poems but so similar as well. Nice to read something a little different. Laura Leiser October 29, 2015 at 1:53 PM I wanted to be a little different and thanks, James :)

Laura Hay October 24, 2015 at 4:30 AM Great poem, love the 3rd line in particular, great imagery from this one, good luck to you too Laura! ;) warm regards LH Laura Leiser October 29, 2015 at 1:52 PM Thank you, Laura!

Jerry T Curtis October 23, 2015 at 4:28 PM I always smells like hickory to me, good one Laura Laura Leiser October 23, 2015 at 4:35 PM I'm glad you liked this, Jerry! Thank you :)

Eric Boddie October 23, 2015 at 1:20 PM as people, we all Love fall....and not the one that leaves us less than tall....but the time of year where change manifests.....and the weather cools, autumn is the best....;) Laura Leiser October 23, 2015 at 4:17 PM Responding on a poem WITH a poem! So cool :) Thank you, Eric!

Jan Allison October 22, 2015 at 6:42 AM lovely imagery Laura good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Laura Leiser October 22, 2015 at 10:02 AM Thank you, Jan. I appreciate your comment :)