Greg Hoffman Poet Cinquain

Autumn Stroll

Crisp winds
Her cheeks blown red
She snuggles close for warmth
A long walk among falling leaves
Perfect

Contest: Autumn Stroll Cinquain Form
Sponsor: Eve Roper
Written: 10/21/2015

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Skat A October 29, 2015 at 9:08 PM Greg, Congratulations on your "Autumn Stroll win." Love SKAT

Kim Merryman October 28, 2015 at 9:52 PM A sweet, cozy picture, Greg! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

James Inman October 27, 2015 at 8:29 AM Very nice feelings with this, Greg. Nicely done.

Andrea Dietrich October 24, 2015 at 7:59 AM Very nice! You did it very succinctly. I have written three stanzas I think (not posted yet) and in my poem, the girl also snuggles up to someone! Greg Hoffman October 24, 2015 at 10:27 AM Fall is a good time to snuggle.Thanks for commenting Greg Hoffman October 24, 2015 at 10:24 AM Fall is a good time to snuggle.Thanks for commenting

Laura Leiser October 21, 2015 at 11:36 PM Enjoyed the word picture you created with your Autumn haiku, Greg! Good luck in the contest :) Greg Hoffman October 24, 2015 at 10:20 AM Thank you Laura for commenting

Barbara Gorelick October 21, 2015 at 10:26 PM Very nice Greg, the perfect walk indeed. Bg Greg Hoffman October 24, 2015 at 10:19 AM Barbara thanks for stopping by and commenting