Autumn Stars

Autumn Stars

Autumn stars mature in the swirling Milky Way, 
Umber, gold and fire of astral leaves
Twirling in the gradual autumnal transition sway
Under falling aster stars born of grace
Missing now the summer song of swan and lyre lays - 
New the frosty Sculptor to crisp nights.

Stellar autumn artistry gathers fruits from galaxy fields
Then rides on Pegasus across the Centauri season
Abundant harvest of astral constellations gleaned yields 
Ripening in celestial orchards of southern autumn’s hiatus -
Soul and Heart nebula bouquets seed Orion revealed.

10-1-21
Contest: Autumn Acrostic
Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Calasibetta Avatar
October 19, 2021 at 2:03 PM
Congratulations on your win. Autumn is my favorite time of year~your imagery paints a lovely picture. Blessings, Paulette
Goldsmith Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 11:37 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Autumn Stars" is a creative acrostic write. Have a blessed autumn day........
Kauffman Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 11:55 AM
Hi Paula! Thank you my friend! I love stargazing and wondering what lays beyond our universe. Sending you blessings of stars my friend!
Miller Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 12:49 AM
A great write, Sam, congratulations.
Kauffman Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 11:51 AM
Thank you so much Terry. I am an inveterate star gazer. This acrostic was so much fun to create. I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for stargazing with me. All the best!
Canerdy Avatar
October 14, 2021 at 2:05 PM
Vividly descriptive, a delight to read. CONGRATS, Sam! Janice
Kauffman Avatar
October 14, 2021 at 5:38 PM
Thank you Janice! I am so glad this was a delightful read! I had so much fun creating this walk through the autumn sky. So appreciate your message and your congratulations! Blessings.
Alex Avatar
October 14, 2021 at 9:54 AM
Great writing with beautiful imagery. congratulations!
Kauffman Avatar
October 14, 2021 at 10:46 AM
Thank you so much Chris. Love doing acrostics and autumn was a great theme! Sending you the blessings of the season!
Faulkner Avatar
October 14, 2021 at 8:36 AM
I love this season, especially the stars, your pen is so evocative of that mood, congratulations on your win-
Kauffman Avatar
October 14, 2021 at 10:41 AM
Like you I love this season and the nighttime autumn sky - so many wonderful, easily identifiable constellations. Thank you for your message Michelle. I am so glad this acrostic was able to pick up on that autumnal feeling awaiting the return of Orion. Blessings!
Callus Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 2:07 PM
Beautiful imagery and a delightful choice of words, Sam. Autumn's stars, when not hidden by clouds, offer lots of inspiration. ~ Regards // paul
Kauffman Avatar
October 14, 2021 at 10:02 AM
Hi Paul! Am so embarrassed that I did not see your wonderful feedback on this acrostic! Thank you many times over for your up-lifting message. The autumn sky has always been a delightful source of inspiration. Blessings to you!
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