Autumn Spider

Blind Arachne spins
A veil of shimmering white
For her wedding feast
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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July 8, 2009 at 3:21 PM
Kool Haiku Frances>>James
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July 5, 2009 at 8:53 AM
Much to think about in just three lines. Nice use of imagery. The last line is a bit of a surprise which enhances the rest. Thank you for your kind comment. Have a good day. Karen
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July 4, 2009 at 11:49 AM
Awesome job! I like the flow of the words and the essence of the poem. Welcome to PoetrySoup! ~Joseph
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