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Autumn Spells Haiku

9/15/2026

             
                      the autumnal leaves

                      intoxicating colors, whirl

                      fireplace, crackles.
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Fowler Avatar
September 17, 2023 at 7:46 AM
Ummm. I am ready for Fall. This is beauty in the air! :)
Romios Avatar
September 17, 2023 at 9:53 AM
After a steamy, hot summer, I just know,,,you long for fall. Thank you. Pangie xx
Lindley Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 11:21 AM
A deep image created with this haiku. God bless you my friend.
Romios Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 1:17 PM
Than you Robert! You understood the scene I created, right on the money.)) Thank you for commenting, Pangie xxx
Hinshaw Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 10:21 AM
A very nice haiku, Pangie, depicting my favorite season of the year! Bob H
Romios Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 10:26 AM
Hi dear Robert, thank you for sharing about your favorite season. It is really pretty. My favorite season is spring. The smell of fresh flowers in intoxicating. Fall, was more fun in the Midwest. Far more colorful than in California.. I appreciate your comment very much. God bless you. Pangie xx
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September 16, 2023 at 2:41 AM
Perfect haiku. I loved how you conjured it.
Romios Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 7:53 AM
Good day in Malta, Victor! Always a special treat to hear from you! Thank you for your kind words, Pangie xx
Empress Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 12:57 AM
Ah this is such a gorgeous haiku my dear Pangie, i love the whirling colors of autumn throughout and also the sound of fireplace crackling. How serene. “ intoxicating colors” exactly what id agree with, something about colors of autumn is so soul warming. Hope you are well my dear . Sending you well wishes always
Romios Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 10:31 AM
Ink, you are a smashing artiste in the sphere of the comment world. Wow! It’s funny. but you make me love my own, always simple poetry-)).on top of that..your poetry is gorgeous. Thank you Pangie xx
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