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Autumn Snores

autumn snores sleepy autumn eyes daylight slips into midnight ~ vesper barcarolles autumn softly snores cornucopia of dreams ~ astral autumn fields 11-13-22 Contest: Bit Size Poem No. 55 Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Valsa George

Date: 11/19/2022 3:24:00 AM

Your haikus are exceptional ....Sam. ! All the Best!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2022 3:46:00 PM

wow, is this ever pretty, Sam. Hope ya get a win.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/14/2022 1:14:00 PM

Me too! Many thanks for your delightful feedback and your good wishes coming your way. This was a fun one to create! However, every time I read it I'm definitely ready for a fall nap in front of a cozy fire!!! Blessings!

Kelly Deschler

Date: 11/13/2022 11:49:00 AM

This poem conjures up such wonderful, dreamy images... So peaceful, like a lullaby... Nicely done, Sam... Best wishes for the contest!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/14/2022 1:11:00 PM

Kelly, thank you so much! I really appreciate your perceptive feedback! Had fun putting this together and I watch autumn fall asleep! Blessings to you!

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/13/2022 11:20:00 AM

Love this. Very nice. Well written :)

Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/14/2022 1:09:00 PM

Hi Heidi! Heartfelt thanks coming your way. I had fun with this one. Seems to me that, unlike winter that sleeps, spring that wakes and summer that is always awake, as autumn deepens it becomes drowsy waiting for its winter sleep! So happy you enjoyed this bit of seasonal whimsy! Blessings!