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Autumn Snores

autumn snores

sleepy autumn eyes
 daylight slips into midnight ~
  vesper barcarolles

autumn softly snores
 cornucopia of dreams ~
  astral autumn fields

11-13-22
Contest:  Bit Size Poem No. 55
Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Valsa George

November 19, 2022 at 3:24 AM

Your haikus are exceptional ....Sam. ! All the Best!

Andrea Dietrich

November 13, 2022 at 3:46 PM

wow, is this ever pretty, Sam. Hope ya get a win.

Sam Kauffman

November 14, 2022 at 1:14 PM

Me too! Many thanks for your delightful feedback and your good wishes coming your way. This was a fun one to create! However, every time I read it I'm definitely ready for a fall nap in front of a cozy fire!!! Blessings!

Kelly Deschler

November 13, 2022 at 11:49 AM

This poem conjures up such wonderful, dreamy images... So peaceful, like a lullaby... Nicely done, Sam... Best wishes for the contest!

Sam Kauffman

November 14, 2022 at 1:11 PM

Kelly, thank you so much! I really appreciate your perceptive feedback! Had fun putting this together and I watch autumn fall asleep! Blessings to you!

Heidi Sands

November 13, 2022 at 11:20 AM

Love this. Very nice. Well written :)

Sam Kauffman

November 14, 2022 at 1:09 PM

Hi Heidi! Heartfelt thanks coming your way. I had fun with this one. Seems to me that, unlike winter that sleeps, spring that wakes and summer that is always awake, as autumn deepens it becomes drowsy waiting for its winter sleep! So happy you enjoyed this bit of seasonal whimsy! Blessings!

Autumn Snores

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