Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Tanka

Autumn Shades

Colors fading out
“Old we’re both” my garden says
Gone is October
Leaves now pallid, then calx
Leprous and frothing each day.

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My birth day falls on 30th September

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Andrea Dietrich November 7, 2013 at 4:05 PM I like this one too, and now I remember you are a Libra!!

Richard Lamoureux November 4, 2013 at 8:13 AM A belated Happy Birthday to you Dr. Ram.

Mustapha Mohammed November 4, 2013 at 7:36 AM This is brilliant especially the closing lines.

Linda Jackson November 4, 2013 at 7:21 AM A lovely description of autumn shades. Best wishes Linda x

Shadow Hamilton November 4, 2013 at 7:15 AM well expressed Richard enjoyed very much Ty for your review on Men I have been ill so am far behind on answering remarks. Shadow x smile

Poet Destroyer A November 3, 2013 at 10:15 PM wow...Mostly i love the way the new got a lot going on.... enjoyed,,,LINDA

Sandra Adams November 3, 2013 at 12:36 PM wow...brilliantly penned tanka ...good luck in the contest :)

Demetrios Trifiatis November 3, 2013 at 12:08 PM A reflection of nature in human soul! Excellent painting!

Richard Lamoureux November 3, 2013 at 9:09 AM I like how you added yourself to the image! Well done and worth pondering.

Poet Tacito November 3, 2013 at 9:05 AM Strong & gripping imagery. It's good to read your work again!

Cherie Durbin November 3, 2013 at 5:54 AM lovely imagery!