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Autumn Scene

AUTUMN SCENE Something framed within tells an autumn scene Though grass be still green Flowers yet bloom in lively color A lonely bush flaps the protective white house siding Southward leans And o’er the rooftops Clouds blown dizzy in confusion Race against the Moon Billow such far away grays That something contained within Tells of autumn days

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/30/2011 11:04:00 AM
There is a vibrancy to early autumn that many forget. Tis my season you know. thanks for the comment o my first daily poem.
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Date: 12/30/2011 4:54:00 AM
I can relate to this Daver,,yes a good reflection of life's display..
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Date: 11/3/2011 3:37:00 PM
Thanks for the review of my work..I wish that I could have emailed you some biscuits..Vegetable soup is so delicious in the cool weather..I like cornbread especially fried cornbread with mine though..Sara
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Date: 11/2/2011 11:53:00 AM
Definitely one of the best poems on the approach of autumn that I have ever read, Daver. Your description of the green grass and flowers reminds me of fall in Florida, but I know pansies and chrysanthemums can peer out even through some snow. Magnificent! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/1/2011 4:05:00 PM
Beautifully accomplished! Thank you for sharing and May God Bless!
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Date: 11/1/2011 6:33:00 AM
Tis the first of November and the day is starting out beautiful. The poetry I am reading this morning is very diverse and should make my whole day enjoyable as I read it. Your hearts are overflowing onto your paper and makes such amazing reading. Thank you for sharing your writing with us Daver. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/1/2011 1:41:00 AM
Great picture of nature! Your words express more than a picture could ever.
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Date: 10/31/2011 10:53:00 PM
My favorite time of the year but so fleeting. Wish it lasted longer. Love this verse as the feeling in it is kind of sad.
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Date: 10/31/2011 4:09:00 PM
The shadows show the seasons and the color of the sky....very beautiful. I wrote a poem about having to deal with putting my inlaws in a nursing home and taking away their rights. let me know what you think.....very hard days.
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Date: 10/31/2011 2:29:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your descriptive autumn write...It is upon us..Some places have had snow..Was any near you?...Sara
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