Daver Austin Poet Free verse

Autumn Scene

AUTUMN SCENE

Something framed within tells an autumn scene
Though grass be still green
Flowers yet bloom in lively color
A lonely bush flaps the protective white house siding
Southward leans
And o’er the rooftops
Clouds blown dizzy in confusion
Race against the Moon
Billow such far away grays
That something contained within
Tells of autumn days

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Autumn Ehrhardt December 30, 2011 at 11:04 AM There is a vibrancy to early autumn that many forget. Tis my season you know. thanks for the comment o my first daily poem.

Joe Maverick December 30, 2011 at 4:54 AM I can relate to this Daver,,yes a good reflection of life's display..

Sara Kendrick November 3, 2011 at 3:37 PM Thanks for the review of my work..I wish that I could have emailed you some biscuits..Vegetable soup is so delicious in the cool weather..I like cornbread especially fried cornbread with mine though..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire November 2, 2011 at 11:53 AM Definitely one of the best poems on the approach of autumn that I have ever read, Daver. Your description of the green grass and flowers reminds me of fall in Florida, but I know pansies and chrysanthemums can peer out even through some snow. Magnificent! Love, Carolyn

Suzanne C. Goudreau November 1, 2011 at 4:05 PM Beautifully accomplished! Thank you for sharing and May God Bless!

Carol Sunshine Brown November 1, 2011 at 6:33 AM Tis the first of November and the day is starting out beautiful. The poetry I am reading this morning is very diverse and should make my whole day enjoyable as I read it. Your hearts are overflowing onto your paper and makes such amazing reading. Thank you for sharing your writing with us Daver. Love, Carol

M. Hussain Effendi November 1, 2011 at 1:41 AM Great picture of nature! Your words express more than a picture could ever.

Elizabeth Wesley October 31, 2011 at 10:53 PM My favorite time of the year but so fleeting. Wish it lasted longer. Love this verse as the feeling in it is kind of sad.

Doris Culverhouse October 31, 2011 at 4:09 PM The shadows show the seasons and the color of the sky....very beautiful. I wrote a poem about having to deal with putting my inlaws in a nursing home and taking away their rights. let me know what you think.....very hard days.

Sara Kendrick October 31, 2011 at 2:29 PM Enjoyed reading your descriptive autumn write...It is upon us..Some places have had snow..Was any near you?...Sara