Autumn Reverie

Dream leaf “fall” usher
motley hue cascade unfurled
dull grey sky gaunt sun
mud strewn pockmarks on limp moss
wet nabs ripe fruit orchard splurge 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 11/26/2023 4:42:00 AM
Back with congratulations on your winning work. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
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Date: 11/25/2023 11:15:00 AM
Autumnal tanka splendor, Howard. A vibrant and worthy entry, congratulations on your 3rd Place podium win, bard buddy! Much creativity and inspiration to you this late November weekend. My daughter turns 42 this coming Wednesday. I can still recall the days leading up to her birth. My first twinge of her impending birth was Thanksgiving night. She was our little, "Turkey baby." She gets a kick out of that. Have a grand Saturday. Warmest wishes
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Date: 11/20/2023 10:47:00 AM
Creative lines penned in this one. Way to go. Keep on writing. Sara K
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