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Autumn Reverie

Autumn skies shepherd
splashes of blazing gold, red
brown watercolor
descending foliage creak
and shudder, respite and waits

11/13/2023

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Sam Kauffman

November 14, 2023 at 10:48 AM

The artist arises in your pen to sing, dear friend. Delightful use of color and sound - "creak," "shudder," "blazing." So original like your beautiful paintings!! Thanksgiving blessings to you!

Paula Goldsmith

November 13, 2023 at 10:01 AM

Your "Autumn Reverie" is a lovey write for this time of the year. I love Autumn time. Have a wonderful day/week writing away....................

Sotto Poet

November 13, 2023 at 7:09 AM

Fantastic vision in your tanka. Eve, you did an excellent job with this one.

Sara Kendrick

November 13, 2023 at 4:20 AM

Creative contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. I enjoyed reading about autumn in your area. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

November 13, 2023 at 1:33 AM

Your artistry is a perfect example of great imagery. Hugs and Blessings.

Ink Empress

November 12, 2023 at 11:44 PM

Ah all those autumnal shades and wordplay truly left me captivated and in awe. In few syllables youv painted imagery in such an artistic manner, i see that you are an artist through your word weaving too talented eve. Love this. Goodluck in the contest