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Autumn Reverie

Autumn skies shepherd splashes of blazing gold, red brown watercolor descending foliage creak and shudder, respite and waits 11/13/2023

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/14/2023 10:48:00 AM

The artist arises in your pen to sing, dear friend. Delightful use of color and sound - "creak," "shudder," "blazing." So original like your beautiful paintings!! Thanksgiving blessings to you!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/13/2023 3:39:00 PM

a nicely done Tanka, Eve. I especially loved the first two lines--so accurate! Have a splendid evening, Sara

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/13/2023 10:01:00 AM

Your "Autumn Reverie" is a lovey write for this time of the year. I love Autumn time. Have a wonderful day/week writing away....................

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/13/2023 7:09:00 AM

Fantastic vision in your tanka. Eve, you did an excellent job with this one.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/13/2023 4:20:00 AM

Creative contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. I enjoyed reading about autumn in your area. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/13/2023 1:33:00 AM

Your artistry is a perfect example of great imagery. Hugs and Blessings.

Ink Empress

Date: 11/12/2023 11:44:00 PM

Ah all those autumnal shades and wordplay truly left me captivated and in awe. In few syllables youv painted imagery in such an artistic manner, i see that you are an artist through your word weaving too talented eve. Love this. Goodluck in the contest

Silent One

Date: 11/12/2023 11:34:00 PM

Awesome imagery in your tanka Eve.. you created this one really poetically..