Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Tanka

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11.11.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Autumn Reverie 2 Poetry Contest

Sponsored by: Jcb Brul 

2nd place in the contest

- Autumn Reverie -

                                   sunrise gemstone glow
                              sound of rasping tangled leaves
                                 landscape through the haze
                             time blessed with the richest hues
                                   reflects the joy of childhood

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Malabika Ray Choudhury November 19, 2023 at 6:06 AM Absolutely stunning, Dear Poetess. Love ~

Phyllis Babcock November 14, 2023 at 10:40 AM Love the picture and brings back memories of childhood playing in the leaves. Well said my friend. love phyl

Maria Fernandez-Garcia November 13, 2023 at 3:08 PM Childhood moments Anne. How did you write that?. Unbelievable poem. Nothing but childhood to enjoy even Autumn. Well done my friend. Hugsxxxx Anne-Lise Andresen November 14, 2023 at 2:11 AM - Maria, thank you very much ... I really appreciate your comment :) - hugs

Jan Allison November 13, 2023 at 1:03 PM absolutely charming Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Paula Goldsmith November 13, 2023 at 11:05 AM A lovey write/picture. I love this time of the year. "Good Luck"  Hugs... Have a blessed day/week writing away....................

Silent One November 13, 2023 at 3:18 AM Beautiful poem with lovely imagery...

Victor Buhagiar November 13, 2023 at 1:46 AM Childhood is always joyful. Lovely poem. Blessings.

Yann Rolland November 12, 2023 at 11:15 PM so enjoyable and gracious moment, enjoyed very much Anne Lise

Sotto Poet November 12, 2023 at 6:12 PM This exquisite tanka is a veritable balm for the soul, crafted with the utmost artistry Anne-Lise. The seamless flow of words and the delicate imagery, particularly in the opening and closing lines, evoke a profound sense of admiration within me.

Sara Kendrick November 12, 2023 at 3:30 PM Reads like a winner to me. Way to go. Great exciting snapshot to go along with your creative work. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Thanks for sharing it and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Frederic Parker November 12, 2023 at 8:45 AM this took me back dear poet...we would make forts out of piles of leaves

Ink Empress November 12, 2023 at 3:36 AM This is such a soul warming tanka, i love how you’ve written this, in such a beautiful flow with exquisite imagery especially the first line and also the last line which fits the picture you’ve used here too. Best of luck. Im sure will do very well in the contest

Kim Rodrigues November 11, 2023 at 4:49 PM Kids love the leaves, the snow, the flowers! :’

Regina Elliott November 11, 2023 at 4:44 PM What a spectacular autumnal tanka, Anne-Lise. My very best wishes for the contest, this is a wonderful contender. xxxxx

Daniel Turner November 11, 2023 at 3:33 PM This is wonderful, Anne. Nicely penned!

Vijay Pandit November 11, 2023 at 2:30 PM A beautiful, delightful poem, Anne-Lise.

Tania Kitchin November 11, 2023 at 2:14 PM Anne-Lise, a charming poem.