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Autumn Reverie

Autumn Reverie

impressionists captured reverie 
                      ~gold brushed strokes sway on the prairie 

voices pitch a breezy chord 
                     ~ whilst leaf spirals pile cooling winds award

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Speaks Volumes Date: 11/30/2023 7:01:00 PM Your Monoku set is exquisite Anaya Login to Reply

Karen Croft Date: 11/9/2023 8:58:00 PM Both are very beautiful Login to Reply

Bill Baker Date: 10/29/2023 11:43:00 PM Lovely picture with a matching poem. I like the imagery and your Monoku, SV. Good luck in the contest, my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill Login to Reply I Am Anaya Date: 11/2/2023 1:13:00 PM Thank you, Bill! Blessings and xhugs

Silent One Date: 10/28/2023 11:18:00 AM lovely and beautiful imagery that creates a picture of the season... Good luck in the contest.. Login to Reply I Am Anaya Date: 10/28/2023 11:45:00 AM Thank you so much Silent One! Xhugs ~Anaya

Ink Empress Date: 10/28/2023 5:20:00 AM Dear Anaya, absolutely love this monoku, the way you’ve painted imagery and how youve played around with autumnal words is beyond melodious and captivating! How profound! You are so good in these monoku! I especially love the way youve written “ voices pitch a breezy chord“ how creative and mellifluous is that! Love that! Goodluck for the contest! Im sure this will do very well Login to Reply I Am Anaya Date: 10/28/2023 11:45:00 AM You've made me so happy, it's nice that you pointed out the lines you like. You help so much by encouraging me. Thank you, sweet friend Ink Empress! Xhugs ~Anaya

Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/27/2023 2:23:00 PM What creative/pretty Monoku write. I enjoyed it. Good Luck... Have a great day/weekend................ Login to Reply I Am Anaya Date: 10/27/2023 2:35:00 PM Thank you, Paula! Delighted you enjoyed, have a nice day! xoxo

David Kavanagh Date: 10/27/2023 10:50:00 AM I see what you done here Anaya, and it works just as well in stand alone Monoku form, as it did accompanying the Tanka, still exceptional, cheers David Login to Reply I Am Anaya Date: 10/27/2023 11:12:00 AM Oh, JCB had Monoku Contest, but Tanka form only. So, I did both. Then she fixed it, hence the separation operation. Delighted you think so :David!

Christina Bowring Date: 10/27/2023 10:05:00 AM What a beautiful Monoku Anaya. Such carefully chosen, vivid, visual words and I can’t take my eyes off that moving picture that pairs perfectly with you delightful, artistic write. I’m sure this will do well in the contest. I loved it! Good luck. Hugs to you xx Login to Reply I Am Anaya Date: 10/27/2023 10:08:00 AM Thank you, Christina, although she won't be able to see the gif. So delighted you enjoyed! Thank you for your kind words. xhugs ~Anaya

Victor Buhagiar Date: 10/27/2023 2:16:00 AM I love the Impressionists, especially Renoir. Your Monoku gives that impression of light strokes. Blessings Login to Reply I Am Anaya Date: 10/27/2023 8:02:00 AM One of the greatest, i just put his painting of two girls on my "Sweet Soul Sister" 2/5/2022 Thank you, Victor for your support!