Autumn Rains

Autumn rain so cool and refreshing, Drenching the soil, the roots quench their thirst. The late Summer sun had dried out the ground. The plants wait for rain to abate the dry curse. YOUR BEST FOUR LINE LIGHT VERSE CONTEST - SPONSOR MILTON HANKINS

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Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/22/2021 7:12:00 AM

Lovely. God bless you my friend. Love, Gina

Judy Ball
Date: 9/22/2021 9:27:00 AM

Thank you so much Gina. God Bless, JB

Supraja Kannan

Date: 9/22/2021 5:07:00 AM

Beautiful imagery... Loved the line "The plants wait for rain to abate the dry curse"...

Judy Ball
Date: 9/22/2021 9:24:00 AM

Thank you so much Supraja. God Bless, JB

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 9/21/2021 5:41:00 PM

Hello Judy ... a fine four lines and I could read your appreciation of rain - thank you Judy - Lindsay PS: We just had a severe earth tremor that shook our house for close to a minute.

Judy Ball
Date: 9/21/2021 5:53:00 PM

Thank you so much Lindsay. WoW! I've been through hurricanes many times and 1 tornado but thank God no earth quakes. Hope all is well with you. God Bless, JB

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 9/21/2021 2:16:00 PM

Lovely autumna! piece Judy, it brings such a lovely picture of the autumn season. Take care blessings always,Gordon

Judy Ball
Date: 9/21/2021 3:33:00 PM

Thank you so much Gordon. God Bless, JB

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/21/2021 11:26:00 AM

Hello Judy Ball, plants come to life when a downpour of rain happens. Everything turns to green. Hugs Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/22/2021 10:24:00 AM

Hello Judy Ball. I also love the rainy nights it helps me to sleep better. I enjoy the sound of the raindrops hitting the window. Bless. Darlene

Judy Ball
Date: 9/21/2021 1:51:00 PM

I do love a rainy night. Thanks bunches. God Bless, JB

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/21/2021 8:00:00 AM

Wow! Judy, Your four lines were so descriptive and well written. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day;-) Alexis

Judy Ball
Date: 9/21/2021 9:04:00 AM

Thank you so much Alexis. God Bless, JB