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Autumn Promises

autumn promises embrace the silence, melting away bitterness, awakening the brilliance of peace in the shadows of His grace - Quote by Poet Syllable based – 5-3-5 harvest heals the heart leaves dancing hues of faith and hope Word based 3-5-3 orange and gold breath love upon the soul prayers and psalms Lune (Mixed Pair) Poetry Contest Sponsored by: William Kekaula October 17, 2021 Two mixed originals of a new form of haiku known as 'Lune'. There are two different versions of this non-rhyming form, each follows a strict structured format that is not interchangeable. First, there is the syllable-based, 5-3-5 version, second, is the word-based, 3-5-3 version. Create Lunes of each version, one-time-only, bearing a shared theme of your choice.
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Kauffman Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 1:57 PM
So lovely Gina! It has the elegance of a floating leaf. Wonderful color! Soup mail. Blessings and a hug.
Allison Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 2:36 PM
absolutely delightful Regina:-) hugs Jan xx
Ebbs Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 9:27 AM
I love these two lines: "orange and gold breath love upon the soul" Thank You :)
Kendrick Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 7:05 AM
Both are good ones. I enjoyed seeing the fall scene in the animated snapshot. This one reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Sara
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