Autumn Promises

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autumn promises embrace the silence, melting away bitterness, awakening the brilliance of peace in the shadows of His grace - Quote by Poet Syllable based – 5-3-5 harvest heals the heart leaves dancing hues of faith and hope Word based 3-5-3 orange and gold breath love upon the soul prayers and psalms Lune (Mixed Pair) Poetry Contest Sponsored by: William Kekaula October 17, 2021 Two mixed originals of a new form of haiku known as 'Lune'. There are two different versions of this non-rhyming form, each follows a strict structured format that is not interchangeable. First, there is the syllable-based, 5-3-5 version, second, is the word-based, 3-5-3 version. Create Lunes of each version, one-time-only, bearing a shared theme of your choice.

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/18/2021 1:57:00 PM

So lovely Gina! It has the elegance of a floating leaf. Wonderful color! Soup mail. Blessings and a hug.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/17/2021 2:36:00 PM

absolutely delightful Regina:-) hugs Jan xx

Edward Ebbs

Date: 10/17/2021 9:27:00 AM

I love these two lines: "orange and gold breath love upon the soul" Thank You :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/17/2021 7:05:00 AM

Both are good ones. I enjoyed seeing the fall scene in the animated snapshot. This one reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Sara