Autumn Pie

Apple pie, fresh from the oven
cools on a rack, whiffs of cinnamon-nutmeg
aroma rise through the pastry vent
then drifts out through
the kitchen window opened an inch or so
mingling with a hint of moulder on the breeze.

The apple peelings still lay on newspapers 
on the counter, deep crimsons mottled with yellow, green
mirror fall leaves of brilliant hues.
Is this a coincidence? Perhaps - but perhaps not -
possibly nature intends apples such colours
as a reminder autumn is close at hand.

The pastry, free-formed into an irregular shape,
rustic, like nature. Trees, some now partially stripped
of leaves, expose gnarled limbs twisting and turning
madly off in all directions. Showing its imperfections
yet is beautiful in its own way
silhouetted against an October deep azure sky.

Reminiscences of baking apple pie
snapshots in an album in the mind's eye
retrieving them, recollecting that day will sustain
when December's snowflakes flutter about,
when January's winds wail and
when February's blizzards drift high against the doors

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/10/2020 10:30:00 AM
This is an excellent poem, my dear sister of God's inspirational grace, Carol. I love the flow of the words and the impact of the "Autumn Pie" message. The descriptive excellence is lovely and sends terrific images. The theme stands out, and the tone and tenor move the piece down the page with much grace. Great job! Have a fantastic day, and stay enlightened with God's richest grace and blessings always. https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/53812816-sincerely-speaking-spiritually.
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Carol Fillmore
Date: 12/10/2020 11:39:00 AM
Joseph, Thanks so much for your wonderful comments about "Autumn Pie"!
Date: 2/10/2016 12:40:00 AM
CAROL, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry, LINDA
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Carol Fillmore
Date: 5/18/2019 10:16:00 AM
thank you Linda. I've not been around on the site much in recent years although have been writing albeit infrequently. the urge to write again has resurfaced:)
Date: 10/28/2015 6:54:00 PM
Rereading this one that I find simply stunning!
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Carol Fillmore
Date: 5/18/2019 10:23:00 AM
thank you Andrea for your kind words! My presence on the site has been next to nil, about the same as the writing;) Time to become more present here and get the words flowing more regularly again:) Wondering if I did reply to your comment previously, it has been so long ago that I posted this one that I don't remember lol
Date: 8/25/2015 10:31:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this very descriptive work..Reminders of times gone by when the aromas from the kitchen ruled..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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Carol Fillmore
Date: 8/25/2015 10:35:00 AM
Sara thanks so much for your very kind comments of "Autumn Pie". It was a pleasure to read your poem today, it's lovely!
Date: 4/22/2015 11:41:00 PM
this poem is amazing. I am a child of early fall/ late summer and I love how you used the imagery of apples throughout this autumn poem. FAVE
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Carol Fillmore
Date: 4/25/2015 9:43:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, for your comment on my poem:) Very appreciated! I've been absent on here for awhile but have been writing all the while.
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