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Autumn Pathetique

Autumn 10-2-23 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Autumn Pathetique God winks with fall in blessedness A pathetique from a soft breeze, Silk sonatas, scarlet tresses, Abundant blessings and jubilees. Veiled in gold, summer’s parting kiss, God winks with fall in blessedness, As amber shadows reminisce Songs of geese with tender finesse. Rust tremolos of grace confess Thankfulness in coral colognes God winks with fall in blessedness, Arpeggios in jewel tones. Autumn’s grace notes in golden fields Begs hearts to see sacred largess, Anointed days of hallowed yields - God winks with fall in blessedness.

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Susan Ashley

Date: 12/4/2023 6:13:00 PM

My Dearest Rhyme Time Friend, Abundant blessings and jubilees, indeed! Your precious verse appreciates and celebrates Autumn with heartfelt gratitude, beauty, sparkling colors and musicality! Your golden pen exalts the imagination of our Creator for blessing Nature with such exquisite gifts for us to gaze upon in thankful wonder. Your grand artistry is inspiring my sweet poetry sis! Congratulations for your excellent win in Joseph's contest. Warmest wishes sent on sparkles of sunlight.. ~Susan

Joseph May

Date: 12/4/2023 1:57:00 AM

Congrats on your win Sam, Very nicely penned

Ink Empress

Date: 10/5/2023 2:42:00 AM

The way you weave words is truly beautiful and awe inspiring! Such brilliant diction and imagery, showing beauty of autumn in a fine poetic manner that truly deserve all the accolades dear poetess! I love the way you’ve started the poem and also the imagery and how you’ve expressed gratitude and Gods blessings in sheer eloquence. Begs heart to see sacred largess! That line stood out for me and colours! i just posted too an autumnal poem and i must say the smoothness of your lines is so serene!

Juliet Ligon

Date: 10/3/2023 10:30:00 PM

I love your tone in giving thanks to God for this blessed season. "Coral colognes" just is lovely.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/4/2023 11:42:00 AM

Hi Juliet! Fall, for me, is truly a time when God's abundant blessings are in full view - a time to celebrate wonder in awe. Had fun creating that image. Sending yo blessings of autumn joy and gratitude for your lovely visit!

Len Gasun

Date: 10/3/2023 8:45:00 PM

The beauty of autumn in your poem is like a very beautiful song my dearest poet friend Sam. Your creative words painted an exquisite melodic wonder making me bask vicariously in the bountiful blessings of autumn. I love and enjoyed your quatern a lot. Thank you so much for sharing. More autumn blessings to you dear and your loved ones. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/4/2023 11:47:00 AM

Dearest Len, what a joy and a blessing your gracious words and feedback are to my heart! There is no greater compliment from a fellow poet than to know you were able to experience the wonder and surprises of autumn through this poem. Had such fun writing this quatern expressing the blessings I see every day in the season. Thank you for that blessing! Sending abundant blessings for you and your family dear one!

Paige Hind

Date: 10/3/2023 2:31:00 PM

Truly beautiful, Sam! Wow!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/4/2023 11:37:00 AM

Thank you so much, Paige. Autumn, for me, is truly an ongoing jubilee - a unique celebration of abundance. A dance! Sending you blessings of autumn's joy!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/2/2023 6:23:00 PM

Fresh! I love your take on Autumn with God winks and Grace notes!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/4/2023 11:33:00 AM

Thank yo so much, Kim! Even though God is present in every season for me there is such a sense of God's playfulness in fall. Who but our wonderful, and slightly crazy God, would think to turn a green leaf orange?! Thank you for sharing in the glorious jubilee of fall. Blessings of autumn joy to you!

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/2/2023 4:38:00 PM

Hi Sam! You remind me of an orchestra leader except in poetry,you get all the instruments, the words and your notes to work in perfect unison to provide an outstanding performance . Bravo….Maestra! Take a bow! A fave, Pangiexx

Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/4/2023 11:27:00 AM

Hi Pangie! What a lovely message! I am deeply honored by your beautiful words, fav and feedback! So many times I think of writing poetry like writing a song. Funny how two minds can run in the same vein and on the same road at the same time! Then there are times when words and cadence seems to have an "attitude!" Dissonance needs a little grooming! But even that is a fruitful experience and I learn so much. Hope you are well. Looks like we are going to have a little "heat wave!" Stay cool! Blessings to you dear friend.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/2/2023 1:56:00 PM

I found this poem delightful--it had outstanding but purposeful rhyme scheme that was well crafted. I found "God Winks with fall in blessedness' so appropriate. I sometimes think God winks at all of us from time to time :-)

Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/4/2023 11:20:00 AM

Hi Sara! We are so blessed when God winks at us in moments of serendipity and surprise. Of all the seasons autumn, for me, is full of that sense of serendipity as our wonderful, and sometimes crazy, God thinks to turn a green leaf orange! Thank you so much for the blessing of your lovely visit and feedback! Sending you blessings of autumn joy!!