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Autumn On the Wind

You can smell Autumn on the wind as the leaves change from green to yellow, red and orange Eventually to fall to the ground for you to have to rake up You rake the leaves into nice, big piles You decide before you bag them to have a little fun You take a flying leap straight into the middle of the pile of your choosing sending leaves of every color in all directions It gives you more work as you rake up the mess you made But you had fun in the moment On this cool Autumn day Contest Title: Fall Flavors Poetry Contest Contest Sponsor: Regina McIntosh Theme used: Raking Leaves Written on: September 6, 2022

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Date: 9/7/2022 3:54:00 PM
Yeah, Julie, We did that, too, but in the "olden" days, we could then set fire to it all and make a great display!! Thank you for the memory tug! Elizabeth
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Date: 9/7/2022 3:06:00 PM
Your poetry brings out the best in Autumn, lovely poem penned dear friend, thank you for sharing your talent
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Date: 9/7/2022 1:33:00 AM
There is an element of fun in your poem. Autumn leaves are fun. I wrote one that compares with yours. Maybe one of these days you will read it.
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Date: 9/6/2022 1:21:00 PM
A very fun poem. I enjoyed and could see it happening :)
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Date: 9/6/2022 7:22:00 AM
A good poem. Well done.
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Date: 9/6/2022 6:29:00 AM
Your descriptive poem resonates with this fall lover! Janice
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Date: 9/6/2022 5:46:00 AM
I have done that growing up Julie and it brought back memories so much fun you can have with leaves. Enjoyed reading have a nice day...
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