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Autumn Oak Tree

The cold north winds that stripped you bare,
Shall bring a white cloak for you to wear.

This is how my Autumn trees look already.

11.19.2014
For Rick Paris's
Contest Crystalline
4th

Copyright © Brenda Meier-Hans | Year Posted 2014

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Faye Gibson Date: 11/28/2014 9:42:00 AM This is a beautiful one, Brenda. Congratulations. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/24/2014 1:15:00 PM I see your name is on the winner's list..It was awesome to see it there..Creative work needs a congrats..Sara Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/24/2014 3:03:00 PM Thanks Sara

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 11/24/2014 10:22:00 AM Wow, Brenda...beautiful picture and words!! Congrats! :)) Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/24/2014 3:02:00 PM Thanks so much Rhonda.

Rob Carmack Date: 11/24/2014 9:20:00 AM Congrats Brenda, the picture was a nice touch. Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/24/2014 3:02:00 PM Thanks Rob.

Maurice Yvonne Date: 11/24/2014 8:32:00 AM Absolutely love this Crystaline. Congratulations on your well earned win. Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/24/2014 3:01:00 PM Thank you so much Maurice.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 11/24/2014 8:06:00 AM Hi Brenda It's wonderful >love CONGRATS on win. Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/24/2014 3:01:00 PM Thanks Rajat

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/23/2014 10:15:00 PM glad to see this one do so well in the contest! Congrats to you. Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/24/2014 3:00:00 PM Thanks so much Andrea

David Mohn Date: 11/23/2014 8:38:00 PM Beautiful picture Brenda...congrats Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/24/2014 2:59:00 PM Thank you David.

John Lawless Date: 11/23/2014 6:05:00 PM Brenda, excellent and chilling. Congrats on you win. Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/24/2014 2:58:00 PM Thanks John

Joseph May Date: 11/23/2014 5:51:00 PM Congrats on your win Brenda Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/24/2014 2:57:00 PM Thank you Joseph

Debbie Guzzi Date: 11/23/2014 4:56:00 PM wow that made me shiver!! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/24/2014 2:57:00 PM Thanks Debbie

Sandra Haight Date: 11/23/2014 3:33:00 PM Brenda, congratulations on your win! I love the way you departed from the oak in autumn to show it bare in winter with its white cloak. Wow...your winter sure came early! Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/24/2014 2:56:00 PM Thanks so much Sandra. Yes, we had a lot of snow but now it has rained and our trees are bare naked once again.

Kayod5 Kayode Date: 11/23/2014 1:26:00 PM I knew this is going to be a winner ,happy I am it is; congrats on the win Brenda...huggs Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/24/2014 2:53:00 PM Thanks so much for your support Kayod5

Carrie Richards Date: 11/23/2014 1:05:00 PM Such a beautiful poem, Brenda! Excellent entry to Ricks contest!! Congratulations! Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/24/2014 2:53:00 PM Thanks so much Carrie.

Jan Allison Date: 11/23/2014 11:47:00 AM I can't believe I missed this Brenda - wonderful imagery my friend:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/24/2014 2:52:00 PM Thank you Jan.

Sandip Goswami Date: 11/22/2014 1:45:00 PM Yes, very nice. I am sure that you are a natural poet..."Another poem is hidden into the poem. Epic of time is sleeping on her chest.... The Poet has been trying to create The only one poem with deep pains.... " Regards... Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/22/2014 2:28:00 PM Thank you Sandip, but I think your imagination surpasses my creativity.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/21/2014 9:27:00 PM very nice one. My trees are not stripped bare yet but they are getting there!! Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/21/2014 10:54:00 PM Thanks Andrea

Kayod5 Kayode Date: 11/21/2014 12:37:00 PM You really carved this out Brenda and really enjoyed it ;goodluck in the contest...huggs Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/21/2014 10:53:00 PM Thank you Kayod5

James Fraser Date: 11/21/2014 12:28:00 PM Beautifully crafted Brenda, and what gorgeous vista they show us, James :) Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/21/2014 10:53:00 PM Thanks so much James

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 11/21/2014 2:08:00 AM Bragging beauty your trees my dear , Brenda! Excellent verse! Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/21/2014 10:52:00 PM Thanks Demetrios

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/20/2014 5:01:00 PM Thanks for the visit to my page..I am sorry to be so long in responding back..Life has been a little different lately..Sara..Great work..Reads like a winner to me..We don't get much snow here where I live but seems like some parts of USA has had an early start.. Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/21/2014 10:46:00 PM Yes, we are only two hours from Buffalo were it was really hit hard. Thanks for stopping by Sara.

Shadow Hamilton Date: 11/20/2014 2:57:00 PM you have captured their spirit to perfection Brenda beautiful trees enhanced by your words hugs 7 Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/21/2014 10:45:00 PM Thanks so much Shadow.

Paul Callus Date: 11/20/2014 9:09:00 AM This is such a beautiful crystalline, Brenda. I see that the wind is trying to make up for his former arrogance! // paul Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/21/2014 10:44:00 PM Thank goodness he has a conscience Paul. Thanks for stopping by.

Darlene Gifford Date: 11/20/2014 8:06:00 AM Dazzling, inspiring, beautiful oak trees, Brenda. And so is your poem. A 7 and a sav. I praise God for giving you your talent of poetry and your using it so expressively. While other God given talents are wasted! Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/21/2014 10:41:00 PM Thank you so much Darlene.

Nette Onclaud Date: 11/20/2014 7:59:00 AM such rich imagery...and the last one indeed made me sigh, Brenda...well penned.. huggs Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/21/2014 10:39:00 PM Thank you Nette

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