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Autumn Notes

you carry a tune as delightful as autumn ~ raspy and bitter 10/8/22 Contest: Simply Senryu Contest Sponsor: John Lawless

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Michael Tor

Date: 10/21/2022 1:48:00 PM

Clever indeed you are Tania love this one a favorite...

Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/22/2022 9:55:00 AM

Michael, thank you!

Robert Gorelick

Date: 10/15/2022 4:51:00 PM

Too many of those raspy leaves to rake up, I hear you! Robert

Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/16/2022 3:39:00 AM

Robert, thank you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/15/2022 9:16:00 AM

Big congrats on your win, Tania.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/15/2022 12:22:00 PM

Andrea, thank you!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/15/2022 6:05:00 AM

Whoa!! That doesn't sound good. I hope no one you know if a work that came to mind. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my blog. Sara

Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/15/2022 8:10:00 AM

Sara, thank you and you're welcome!

John Lawless

Date: 10/14/2022 6:36:00 AM

loved this metaphor Tania, thanks for entering it in the contest.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/14/2022 2:03:00 PM

John, thank you and thank you for my placement in your contest!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/9/2022 8:56:00 AM

Love this one, Tania, and thanks for the recent contest you hosted. I really enjoyed visiting all the winners.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/9/2022 1:57:00 PM

Andrea, thank you and you're welcome!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/9/2022 2:08:00 AM

I love autumn in Malta. It is like spring...but wait November comes and it will be just rain.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/9/2022 4:17:00 AM

Victor, thank you for your visit!

Jeff Kyser

Date: 10/8/2022 5:08:00 PM

So autumn is not your favorite? Lol, I love it!

Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/8/2022 6:42:00 PM

Jeff, no, not really a fan of late Autumn, thank you!

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/8/2022 12:44:00 PM

Lovely Senryu, Tania. You did a great job of painting a picture of the fall music. The contrast between raspy and bitter was fantastic.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/8/2022 2:53:00 PM

Lasaad, thank you!

Jenna Logan

Date: 10/8/2022 12:41:00 PM

Expressions from the heart who wishes for a deaf ear? Loved this one, Tania.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/8/2022 2:53:00 PM

Jenna, thank you!