Autumn Notes

you carry a tune
as delightful as autumn ~
raspy and bitter

10/8/22
Contest: Simply Senryu Contest
Sponsor: John Lawless
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Tor Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 1:48 PM
Clever indeed you are Tania love this one a favorite...
Kitchin Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 9:55 AM
Michael, thank you!
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October 15, 2022 at 4:51 PM
Too many of those raspy leaves to rake up, I hear you! Robert
Kitchin Avatar
October 16, 2022 at 3:39 AM
Robert, thank you!
Dietrich Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 9:16 AM
Big congrats on your win, Tania.
Kitchin Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 12:22 PM
Andrea, thank you!
Kendrick Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 6:05 AM
Whoa!! That doesn't sound good. I hope no one you know if a work that came to mind. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my blog. Sara
Kitchin Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 8:10 AM
Sara, thank you and you're welcome!
Lawless Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 6:36 AM
loved this metaphor Tania, thanks for entering it in the contest.
Kitchin Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 2:03 PM
John, thank you and thank you for my placement in your contest!
Dietrich Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 8:56 AM
Love this one, Tania, and thanks for the recent contest you hosted. I really enjoyed visiting all the winners.
Kitchin Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 1:57 PM
Andrea, thank you and you're welcome!
Buhagiar Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 2:08 AM
I love autumn in Malta. It is like spring...but wait November comes and it will be just rain.
Kitchin Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 4:17 AM
Victor, thank you for your visit!
Kyser Avatar
October 8, 2022 at 5:08 PM
So autumn is not your favorite? Lol, I love it!
Kitchin Avatar
October 8, 2022 at 6:42 PM
Jeff, no, not really a fan of late Autumn, thank you!
Poet Avatar
October 8, 2022 at 12:44 PM
Lovely Senryu, Tania. You did a great job of painting a picture of the fall music. The contrast between raspy and bitter was fantastic.
Kitchin Avatar
October 8, 2022 at 2:53 PM
Lasaad, thank you!
Logan Avatar
October 8, 2022 at 12:41 PM
Expressions from the heart who wishes for a deaf ear? Loved this one, Tania.
Kitchin Avatar
October 8, 2022 at 2:53 PM
Jenna, thank you!
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