Autumn Night Shadows

Shadows of the newest night;
strange, moving, fluid motions    
cast in simple black and white,
flash out and pinch your notions.

Shadows leaping may thrill you.
Shadows creeping may chill you.
Shadows may move upon wind
to plant whispers in your hair
or tease traces on your skin.
Shadows prize giving goose bumps
with no beginning or end.
Shadow shapes won’t let you know
if they touch you close as foe
or caress you as a friend.

Tonight’s shadow wind is charm –
just autumn’s yearly alarm
that her color and brightness
will soon recess behind us!

Step tonight into shadows
that flirt with the playful wind.
Inhale anticipation
as autumn’s shadows do spin
wonderment anew, again.
Not shadows to fight or flee.
These shadows move in delight
on breeze of pure, dancing glee.
It is autumn’s majesty –
she’s celebrating herself,
calling you to smile and see
her colorful, splendid wealth.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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December 8, 2015 at 1:00 PM
CayCay, Congratulations, SKAT
Cheema Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 4:45 AM
Autumn at its best with puslari g imagery!
Nau Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 1:59 PM
LOVE love this! It works on so many different levels. Enjoyed the experiment of fear of shadow with the metaphor of shadow as part of the autumnal season...a changeling from Summer to Fall with the hint of Winter. The snap-shots for each stanza shows are a complete picture. Nicely done, this is a 7 and best wishes for the contest.
Inman Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 11:33 AM
Beautiful upbeat Autumn shadows, CayCay. Mine are more frightening... as usual.
Inman Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 3:07 PM
Not that scary
Godwin Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 2:56 PM
Eww - I shall read your fright-write! Thank you for reading me and commenting (should I be scared?) ... CayCay
Lindley Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 9:01 AM
This is a stunning write my friend!!! Simply have to add to my fav list. A7
Godwin Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 2:55 PM
How sweet to find your message here. Thank you, Robert ... CayCay
Onclaud Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 11:12 AM
sooo beautiful, cay..you really flow!..huggs
Godwin Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 6:13 PM
Thank you, Sweetie - very much ... CayCay
Woods    Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 10:15 PM
Wow oh wow. This is sensational, just love the descriptions and the pictures this splendid poem paints within my mind.
Godwin Avatar
November 10, 2015 at 9:33 AM
Thank you, dear - you know what WOW does to me, love those WOWS .... CayCay
Allison Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 4:17 AM
such wonderful imagery CayCay I hope my muse returns so I can write with enthusiasm once again:-( good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Allison Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 8:29 AM
If you see her in cyber speace - send her back to me:-(:-( hugs jan xx
Godwin Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 8:24 AM
Rut ro - where did your muse go? Is it still on vacation, ya think? I'm delighted you enjoyed my poem and I'll stay alert to look for your muse - we can't have that ... CayCay
Trifiatis Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 3:17 AM
Shadows inspiring such a poem cannot remain dark as they bring delight in the heart, dear CayCay. Good luck!
Godwin Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 8:25 AM
Thank you, Demetrios - a wonderful comment ... CayCay
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