Lin Lane Poet Free verse

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Bite size Contest No. 76 ~ Sponsor: Line gauthier ~ 11/11/23

Autumn Morning

I woke early this November morning
just before shadows fell at day's dawning. 
In a drizzling shower this Autumn day,
I meandered through a mist filled meadow 
where wild roses drank the morning dew.

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Paula Goldsmith November 13, 2023 at 11:08 AM A wonderful write/pretty picture.  "Good Luck"  I love November/the best time of the year. Have a blessed day/week writing away....................

Paul Willason November 13, 2023 at 1:19 AM Painted perfectly Lin with your usual consummate skill. Adorable little piece to hang up on the mind. Lin Lane November 13, 2023 at 6:11 AM A picture poem to hang on the mind... that a sweet thought. Thank you, Paul.

Tania Kitchin November 12, 2023 at 4:02 PM Lin, beautiful imagery, I can smell the misty roses. Lin Lane November 13, 2023 at 6:10 AM Thank you very much, Tania. They're beautiful with dew drops.

Kim Rodrigues November 11, 2023 at 4:50 PM Last line so pretty! Lin Lane November 11, 2023 at 5:42 PM Thanks, Kim. It’s my fave line, too.

Jeff Connelly November 11, 2023 at 4:03 PM Wonderful. Wonderful to read that roses are still blooming Lin. Thanks Lin Lane November 11, 2023 at 5:41 PM Thanks, Jeff. The photo I found held my attention.

Daisy Meadows November 11, 2023 at 1:16 PM Beautiful poem. Well done. Lin Lane November 11, 2023 at 1:34 PM Thank you very much, Jeanette.