Autumn Morning

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Bite size Contest No. 76 ~ Sponsor: Line gauthier ~ 11/11/23

I woke early this November morning just before shadows fell at day's dawning. In a drizzling shower this Autumn day, I meandered through a mist filled meadow where wild roses drank the morning dew.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/13/2023 11:08:00 AM

A wonderful write/pretty picture. "Good Luck" I love November/the best time of the year. Have a blessed day/week writing away....................

Paul Willason

Date: 11/13/2023 1:19:00 AM

Painted perfectly Lin with your usual consummate skill. Adorable little piece to hang up on the mind.

Lin Lane
Date: 11/13/2023 6:11:00 AM

A picture poem to hang on the mind... that a sweet thought. Thank you, Paul.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 11/12/2023 4:02:00 PM

Lin, beautiful imagery, I can smell the misty roses.

Lin Lane
Date: 11/13/2023 6:10:00 AM

Thank you very much, Tania. They're beautiful with dew drops.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/12/2023 8:11:00 AM

a beautifully flowing and descriptive poem, Lina. I even felt I was there enjoying the drizzling shower. Thank you for the image you created in my mind's eye. Have a lovely day, Sara

Lin Lane
Date: 11/13/2023 6:10:00 AM

Morning, Sara and thank you for walking in the rain with me.