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monarch butterflies fly south to escape the chill as russet leaves fall A Transition Of Seasons Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin 5,7,5 checked with how many syllables 9/9/19

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Date: 9/26/2019 4:57:00 PM
Beautiful little Haiku Jan! Congrats on the win. Blessings, Susan
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Date: 9/26/2019 6:01:00 PM
thanks Susan:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/13/2019 2:48:00 PM
Back with congratulations, Jan...well done! Hugs // paul
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Date: 9/14/2019 3:58:00 AM
thanks Paul:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/13/2019 1:05:00 PM
Such an exquisite Haiku Jan , so beautifully penned. Many congrats on your win. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 9/14/2019 3:57:00 AM
thanks Ann:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/12/2019 3:30:00 PM
My favorite season, and a lovely Haiku! Thanks, Jan ~ Ken
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Date: 9/14/2019 3:52:00 AM
thanks Ken I love autumn too:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/11/2019 7:03:00 AM
Back with congratulations <3 xomo!
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Date: 9/14/2019 3:51:00 AM
thanks Mo:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/11/2019 2:28:00 AM
Back with congrats Jan. Tom.
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Date: 9/11/2019 3:40:00 AM
thanks Tom:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/10/2019 10:32:00 PM
Congratulations for a well-deserved win!
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Date: 9/11/2019 3:40:00 AM
thanks Caren:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/10/2019 8:08:00 PM
Perfect verse, Jan, I love the animation picture of the monarchs it's just beautiful. Congratulations on your win. Hugs
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Date: 9/11/2019 3:40:00 AM
Thanks Eve I wish I could see them for real:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/10/2019 7:34:00 PM
Back with most deserved praise. Congrats, Jan.
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Date: 9/10/2019 7:40:00 PM
thanks Line:-) I'm delighted to place:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/10/2019 6:28:00 PM
Jan, congratulations on your winning placement with your gorgeous haiku, beautiful pic too!
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Date: 9/10/2019 6:43:00 PM
thanks Tania I am delighted to be on your list:-):-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/10/2019 12:50:00 PM
They are so beautiful; wonderful imagery in the poem and the gif.
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Date: 9/10/2019 6:42:00 PM
thanks ML:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/10/2019 3:36:00 AM
Love the image Jan, its a pity we can't join them. Tom
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Date: 9/10/2019 6:41:00 PM
Oh yes off to warmer climes especially at the moment with wintery winds gusting:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/9/2019 11:04:00 PM
BEEEautiful imagery, Jan. Bravo.
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Date: 9/10/2019 1:40:00 AM
Thanks Line, that is praise indeed:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/9/2019 10:38:00 PM
I recall one migration back in the 40s when the air was so thick with Monarchs one could only breath under a shirt or blouse. Soon, your haiku may be all that remains! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 9/10/2019 1:39:00 AM
wow Rico that must have been an incredible sight in more ways than one!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/9/2019 6:50:00 PM
OK, where do I get my wings.....nicely done Jan
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Date: 9/9/2019 6:52:00 PM
lol John I know many folk here from South Africa go back home for the winter and are back here after about 3 months, we call them swallows!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/9/2019 6:28:00 PM
this is lovely, jan! best of luck in the contest...
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Date: 9/9/2019 6:38:00 PM
thanks Ilene its a premiere contest so places will be limited but its worth a try:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/9/2019 5:41:00 PM
they even look themselves like russet leaves. Nice one with that picture, Jan.
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Date: 9/9/2019 6:15:00 PM
thanks Andrea:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/9/2019 4:53:00 PM
Lovely autumnal imagery, Jan. I like the idea of swirling russet leaves. Hugs // paul
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Date: 9/9/2019 6:13:00 PM
thanks Paul:-) its getting decidedly autumnal here now:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/9/2019 4:20:00 PM
Hi Jan, You painted a lovely picture with a few words. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Enjoy the rest of your day :-) Alexis
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Date: 9/9/2019 4:25:00 PM
thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/9/2019 3:01:00 PM
You managed a beautiful haiku. Best for a win, Jan. Hugs xx
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Date: 9/9/2019 4:24:00 PM
thanks Victor:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/9/2019 2:20:00 PM
Oh Lovely! I can see it. I managed to send off three for their migration! One I raised from egg :))) xomo!
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Date: 9/9/2019 4:21:00 PM
oh bravo Mo that's wonderful to hear you must have such a chance of achievement:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/9/2019 2:04:00 PM
Beautifully done my friend and my home is in the path of the Monarchs southern trek into mexico. Any day now they will be everywhere. Best wishes in the contest
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Date: 9/9/2019 4:20:00 PM
Thanks Chris:-) I was inspired by a deluge of painted ladies we have had ascending on us this year, we rarely see them on the Island:-) hugs Jan xx