Autumn Light In Derbyshire

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I wrote this poem on 26 October 2020. It is a reflection about Autumn and nature in Derbyshire or across the globe.

Dark skies lurked to press upon 'em
To Autumn they succumbed
Trying to change was superfluous
By twilight, the hills were overcome

Fingertips of trees reached upward
Hoping to prick the clouds
Windy spirits then flew upward
It was heartfelt and profound

A kindhearted spirit disappeared
Beckoning the leaves to glow
They could not refuse adherence
When down came the shadow

Rain embraced green hills abruptly
Drizzling its dainty fingers
Across grasslands prematurely
Where puddles would linger

Dancing like the deities
Of pagans long ago
Nature shared its transiency 
And shone itself aglow

Autumn carried its winds above
Not knowing what to think
About nature's labour of love
To which humans are linked

The night solemnly awaited
Dusk's passage to morning
The course of time was fated
For Derbyshire's adornment

Animated eastern midlands
And the good people there
Enchantment set them free
Whilst Autumn filled the air 

With colourful leaves everywhere
The Autumn brings them joy
Loving hearts are found in the square
Bright new daylight galore!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 12/10/2020 12:34:00 PM
This is lovely, so enjoyed reading!
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Date: 12/10/2020 12:33:00 PM
This is lovely, so enjoyed reading!
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Date: 12/7/2020 5:19:00 AM
Lovely painterly poem about Autumn in Derbyshire, Laura. Love the idea of the kindhearted spirit, I like to put spirits into my writing. // Barry
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Date: 10/26/2020 11:40:00 AM
Lovely poem; I only recall the frigid winds! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 10/26/2020 6:07:00 AM
what gorgeous tribute with your super autumnal imagery - I was drawn in by the title as i spent my childhood in Derby, used to love going out to the youth hostels in the peak district, it is a stunning area:-) hugs Jan xx
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