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Autumn Lets Us Know

Acorns falling down
                With bright leaves, the trees let go
                         Autumn lets us know
                        It is here, to bring color
                    To the days of our own show

Heidi Sands

10/3/17

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Kelly Deschler

October 4, 2017 at 9:32 PM

Autumn is my favorite season and I can see from the comments below that I'm not the only one... I very much enjoyed reading your poem, Heidi. The imagery is really lovely! Nicely done!

Heidi Sands

October 5, 2017 at 9:18 AM

Hi Kelly. Thank you for your comment and positive feedback on this :)

Janice Canerdy

October 4, 2017 at 8:11 PM

Appealing poem about my favorite season, Heidi! Janice

Heidi Sands

October 4, 2017 at 8:12 PM

Thank you Janice :)

Mike Gentile

October 4, 2017 at 12:55 PM

This is lovely, Heidi, Autumn is here to bring color!

Heidi Sands

October 4, 2017 at 7:10 PM

Thank you Mike :)

Silent One

October 4, 2017 at 12:36 PM

Lovely descriptions..

Heidi Sands

October 4, 2017 at 7:10 PM

Thank you :)

Becca Teagan

October 4, 2017 at 8:33 AM

Fall is my favorite time of year, it's so beautiful even though the colors don't last very long. Love your autumn poem!

Heidi Sands

October 4, 2017 at 8:57 AM

Thank you Becca :)

Russell Sivey

October 4, 2017 at 7:45 AM

What a beautiful write, such a wonderful show of Autumn pride! This season is in full force, though we are experiencing a spell of incredible HEAT before the Fall breezes come into play! Hopefully next week will be better than these HOT days! We are 12 degrees above average, sigh! Sorry I had to get that out, I'm much better now! And your poem, I reread it, and I feel even better, it's a beautiful season, just like your illustrious piece, Great Work!!

Heidi Sands

October 4, 2017 at 7:49 AM

Hi Russell. I hope that you get beautiful cool fall temperature soon. I appreciate your kind comment on this one :) Have a nice day.