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Autumn Leaves - the American Sonnet Style

~Autumn Leaves~
(New American Sonnet)


The days are getting just a little cold
Summers leaving bringing us all a change
Temperature drops, and weather acts strange
Nature wears a new dress and reacts so bold

The birds leave their nests and just fly away
Skies changes hues in no little time
Nature plays best music when is bed time
As fall transforms and makes all things brand-new

As leaves start to change hues in every single tree
They seem to fall one by one to  the ground
My eyes can't help but see beauty around
As fall cool breeze makes me at times just glee

The days start getting now a little chill
And all over the place there is a thrill.


Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2010



September .21. 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Arnone Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 5:07 PM
I wonder how much more enjoyable this fine poem would sound using the traditional English sonnet form (which I am still trying to learn). :-)
Petersen Potter Avatar
October 14, 2016 at 1:37 PM
Thank you ever so kindly Tom, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D
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