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Autumn Leaves

Summer beauty died when you forsook me. Now autumn returns with all its wistful glory. Leaves change their greenish hues into brown, russet, or golden themes, a kaleidoscope of prismatic colors. Trees turn bare as vegetation die. Leaves flutter slowly to the ground, a carpet strewn all over the paths that zigzag through the lonely gardens or long forgotten forest trails, whilst fragrant flowers wilt and wither awaiting the ruined return of an enchanted spring. With winter’s song desolation is all around as acorns fall rapidly to the ground. Days are short and there's a nip in the air as winter woes ominously approach. We are no longer together in our autumn. We lost our trust and we’ll not recapture The way we used to kiss and whisper love. Now it’s a life that's full of aches and sorrows, though the memory of our gone summer days will never be forgotten, and that is why I miss you most of all my darling When autumn leaves start to fall. Inspired by Autumn Leaves sung by Natalie Cole

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Date: 11/1/2020 8:54:00 AM
A little sad, but beautiful canvas of colors. Enjoyed reading . Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/30/2020 3:29:00 PM
Reading this masterpiece again, Victor. Have a great weekend.
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Date: 10/30/2020 11:44:00 PM
You are too kind. Thank you.
Date: 10/30/2020 8:42:00 AM
Such sweet endearing wrods my friend - it must be very hard to lose a partner after so many years together, I feel for you Victor. My you find peace and a knowledge that you have a guardian angel looking after you 24/7. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 10/30/2020 2:02:00 AM
- Autumn is a time for thoughts ... we have the joys of spring and summer in our memories ... a beautiful and moving poem, Victor ... and I love the song you mention :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/29/2020 10:10:00 PM
The colors of autumn are beautiful in this fine poem, tinged with sadness and memory. Blessings, my friend.
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Date: 10/29/2020 5:56:00 PM
I love the way you've brought together autumn with your memories of your lost love. A great song too!
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Date: 10/29/2020 5:06:00 PM
I can really feel the inspiration you gleaned from that wonderful autumn song. I love that song too!!
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Date: 10/29/2020 11:49:00 AM
a life that's full of aches and sorrows...i may know this one day. May God lift your spirits, my friend!
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Date: 10/29/2020 11:38:00 AM
Your poem is just choke full of amazing imagery that tells your melancholy story, Victor. As SO said, it is "beautifully sad."
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Date: 10/29/2020 11:16:00 AM
I believe the song was first sung in the 40's and her dad did a cover of it and it featured in a James Bond movie.. Your poem is beautifully sad my friend..
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Date: 10/29/2020 6:45:00 AM
Hi Victor, You’ve penned such a heartfelt write with much emotion. Good content and vivid imagery. The last two lines sums your write up very well.PS, the song by Natalie Cole inspired such a well written write! :-) Alexis
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Date: 10/29/2020 4:38:00 AM
Such details of seasons wonderfully spun into a treasured memory...your pen delivers brilliantly, as always, Victor.
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Date: 10/29/2020 4:01:00 AM
Summer is just a memory now Victor, autumn is well with us with winter not far off Well written verse. Tom
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Date: 10/29/2020 3:02:00 AM
You write like a bard of old with a new heart everyday. How I love your pen, take care dear heart xo
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