Autumn Leaves

Death paints a Leaf
 With color brilliant
  Before it withers...
Tinged with our grief
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Krutsinger Avatar
October 19, 2018 at 7:56 AM
"death paints a leaf." I so wish I would have thought of this but I did not. Bravo!
Wolf Avatar
October 19, 2018 at 12:35 PM
You just have to leave some crumbs for the rest of us little birdie poets, Caren. ~ Gershon
Green Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 4:21 PM
I love this one, it really touched me. The meaning and message are very deep and your creativity shines here.
Wolf Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 8:47 PM
Appreciate your overly kind words, Chris. (And I hope you liked the title.) Best wishes, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 4:12 PM
I can picture death painting. Wisdom shines then falls.
Wolf Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 8:46 PM
Thanks for reading, reflecting, and reacting, Kim! Much appreciated. ~ Gershon
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