Autumn Leaves

Death paints a Leaf With color brilliant Before it withers... Tinged with our grief

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Date: 10/19/2018 7:56:00 AM

"death paints a leaf." I so wish I would have thought of this but I did not. Bravo!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/19/2018 12:35:00 PM

You just have to leave some crumbs for the rest of us little birdie poets, Caren. ~ Gershon

Date: 10/17/2018 4:21:00 PM

I love this one, it really touched me. The meaning and message are very deep and your creativity shines here.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/17/2018 8:47:00 PM

Appreciate your overly kind words, Chris. (And I hope you liked the title.) Best wishes, Gershon

Date: 10/17/2018 4:12:00 PM

I can picture death painting. Wisdom shines then falls.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/17/2018 8:46:00 PM

Thanks for reading, reflecting, and reacting, Kim! Much appreciated. ~ Gershon