Autumn Is Peeking

autumn is peeking
apples for picking~baking
leaves for the raking
Date Written: 8/21/2022
Note: Haiku Rhyme
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Baker Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 3:50 PM
Nice imagery, looks just like Autumn to me. :-) Write On! my friend. Bill
Goldsmith Avatar
December 15, 2022 at 1:19 PM
Thank You, for reading/writing to me.........
Tor Avatar
September 2, 2022 at 6:40 PM
Love your Haiku, soon Paula it will be exactly how you say Dear. A favorite to read. Will catch up on reading your lovely Poems. God bless you for all you do for others...
Goldsmith Avatar
December 15, 2022 at 1:19 PM
Thank You, for reading/writing to me....
Thomas Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 2:39 PM
While I was never a winter person I would definitely love to see a peek of Fall here in southern Louisiana. Minus the leaf raking lol. Hope your day is going well Paula!
Goldsmith Avatar
December 15, 2022 at 1:19 PM
Thank You, for reading/writing to me........................
Horsman Avatar
August 29, 2022 at 12:10 AM
Wow, an interesting adventure, Paula, a rhyming Haiku, I like it well done.
Goldsmith Avatar
December 15, 2022 at 1:19 PM
Thank You, for reading/writing to me........................
Krutsinger Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 1:05 AM
I wish autumn was peeking here in Kansas; it is everlasting hot here!
Goldsmith Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 8:30 AM
Thanks for your wonderful visit. Glad Autumn is almost here. I love that time of the year. Cooler weather with home baked hot apple pies. Have a fun/blessed day writing away.................
Sangster - K Avatar
August 24, 2022 at 3:14 PM
A lovely Autumn poem Paula. I love picking apples and home baked apple pie. Good luck in the contest and enjoy the rest of your day my friend :-)
Goldsmith Avatar
August 26, 2022 at 11:53 AM
Thanks for your wonderful visit and for your good luck. Glad you love my Autumn write. Home baked apple pies are the best hot out of the oven. Are you baking??? I will be right over. Hahahaha  Have a fun/blessed day writing/baking away.................
Roper Avatar
August 22, 2022 at 4:55 PM
Awesome haiku.. I really love the feel and imagery. Many blessings
Goldsmith Avatar
August 23, 2022 at 10:38 AM
Thanks for your wonderful visit. I see Awesome haiku??? That made my day. "Thank You" Glad you love my Autumn write. Have a fun/blessed day writing away.................
May Avatar
August 22, 2022 at 4:50 PM
Apple pies and lots of leaves to rake, Nicely penned Paula
Goldsmith Avatar
August 23, 2022 at 10:36 AM
Thanks for your wonderful visit. I love Autumn with warm baked apple pies and hot cider. Please, no leaves to rake for me. Glad you like my write. Have a fun/blessed day writing away.................
Buehler Avatar
August 22, 2022 at 4:45 PM
Thank you for sharing this breathtaking peek at lovely autumn, Paula. Best wishes for the contest. :)
Goldsmith Avatar
August 23, 2022 at 10:33 AM
Thanks for your wonderful visit and for your best wishes. Glad you enjoyed my fun peek into lovely autumn. Have a fun/blessed day writing away.................
Wolf Avatar
August 21, 2022 at 6:19 PM
Nifty haiku, Paula. Love the rhyme! Thanks, gw
Goldsmith Avatar
August 22, 2022 at 11:06 AM
Thanks for your wonderful visit. Glad you love my fun Haiku Rhyme. Have a fun/blessed day writing away.................
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