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Autumn Is Peeking

autumn is peeking
apples for picking~baking
leaves for the raking

 

Date Written: 8/21/2022
Note: Haiku Rhyme

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Bill Baker

Date: 9/10/2022 3:50:00 PM

Nice imagery, looks just like Autumn to me. :-) Write On! my friend. Bill

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2022 1:19:00 PM

Thank You, for reading/writing to me.........

Michael Tor

Date: 9/2/2022 6:40:00 PM

Love your Haiku, soon Paula it will be exactly how you say Dear. A favorite to read. Will catch up on reading your lovely Poems. God bless you for all you do for others...

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2022 1:19:00 PM

Thank You, for reading/writing to me....

FJ Thomas

Date: 8/30/2022 2:39:00 PM

While I was never a winter person I would definitely love to see a peek of Fall here in southern Louisiana. Minus the leaf raking lol. Hope your day is going well Paula!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2022 1:19:00 PM

Thank You, for reading/writing to me........................

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/29/2022 12:10:00 AM

Wow, an interesting adventure, Paula, a rhyming Haiku, I like it well done.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2022 1:19:00 PM

Thank You, for reading/writing to me........................

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/27/2022 1:05:00 AM

I wish autumn was peeking here in Kansas; it is everlasting hot here!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/27/2022 8:30:00 AM

Thanks for your wonderful visit. Glad Autumn is almost here. I love that time of the year. Cooler weather with home baked hot apple pies. Have a fun/blessed day writing away.................

Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 8/24/2022 3:14:00 PM

A lovely Autumn poem Paula. I love picking apples and home baked apple pie. Good luck in the contest and enjoy the rest of your day my friend :-)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/26/2022 11:53:00 AM

Thanks for your wonderful visit and for your good luck. Glad you love my Autumn write. Home baked apple pies are the best hot out of the oven. Are you baking??? I will be right over. Hahahaha Have a fun/blessed day writing/baking away.................

Eve Roper

Date: 8/22/2022 4:55:00 PM

Awesome haiku.. I really love the feel and imagery. Many blessings

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/23/2022 10:38:00 AM

Thanks for your wonderful visit. I see Awesome haiku??? That made my day. "Thank You" Glad you love my Autumn write. Have a fun/blessed day writing away.................

Joseph May

Date: 8/22/2022 4:50:00 PM

Apple pies and lots of leaves to rake, Nicely penned Paula

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/23/2022 10:36:00 AM

Thanks for your wonderful visit. I love Autumn with warm baked apple pies and hot cider. Please, no leaves to rake for me. Glad you like my write. Have a fun/blessed day writing away.................

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 8/22/2022 4:45:00 PM

Thank you for sharing this breathtaking peek at lovely autumn, Paula. Best wishes for the contest. :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/23/2022 10:33:00 AM

Thanks for your wonderful visit and for your best wishes. Glad you enjoyed my fun peek into lovely autumn. Have a fun/blessed day writing away.................