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Autumn is Harvest Time

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Rhymes in Nine Contest hosted by Joseph May ~ 9/4/24

Fall's bright colors are taking flight like birds on the wing It's the right time for a clime change and seasonal transformation brisk winds whisk leaves in plight and can no longer cling Autumn sends a note that portends a change is in the air Months of holidays and sublime door displays in celebration of prime family feasts and Halloween beasts that surely scare There are ripe fields to harvest with care and yields to measure Nature conducts bright scenes as she gleans to write an orchestration of Winter snows and light woolen clothes, a season to treasure

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Joseph May

Date: 9/27/2024 12:12:00 PM

Wonderful write Lin, Congrats on your win

Lin Lane
Date: 9/28/2024 4:35:00 AM

Thank you very much for having a placement in your contest, Joseph. I appreciate your thoughtfulness.

Daniel Caplin

Date: 9/5/2024 3:17:00 AM

Hi Lin , what a beautiful picture you paint, I especially loved "when brisk winds whisk trees, and leaves no longer cling Autumn sends a note that portends a change in the air" so many wonderful scenes, all the best for the contest. Danny

Lin Lane
Date: 9/5/2024 3:33:00 AM

Thank you for your well wishes for the contest and for letting me know the lines that stood out to you, Danny.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/4/2024 11:03:00 AM

Hello Lin Lane, oh such a beautiful poem of autumn. yes it is a big change from summer to autumn. I notice the change now. the leaves are slowly changing colors. the children are back in school. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/7/2024 10:25:00 AM

Hellpo Lin lane you are a very good friend. Hugs. /darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/5/2024 8:01:00 AM

Hello Lin, You will love the colours of the leaves. Hugs. /Darlene/

Lin Lane
Date: 9/5/2024 3:32:00 AM

One day I'll make a drive up the East Coast in September or October to see the color changes for myself. Thanks, Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/4/2024 4:36:00 PM

Hello Lin, The Evergreens trees are beautiful. i do like them. The leaves are begging to change color now. I live in Canada. We have 4 seasons. Summer, autumn winter and spring. Winter is the longest season. it never knows when to leave. Hugs my friend. /Darlene

Lin Lane
Date: 9/4/2024 3:28:00 PM

Hi Darlene. I don't get to see the changing colors of many trees here in the South, but don't mind the evergreen. Thanks, sweet friend.

Jay Narain

Date: 9/4/2024 10:23:00 AM

Nice one.

Lin Lane
Date: 9/4/2024 3:27:00 PM

Thank you.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/4/2024 8:48:00 AM

You rose well to the challenge Lin, just back from a walk in the forest. Hope your week is going well. Tom

Lin Lane
Date: 9/4/2024 3:27:00 PM

awww, Tom thank you for your loyal support.

Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/4/2024 9:16:00 AM

I don't think there's any form you can't do Lin,

Lin Lane
Date: 9/4/2024 8:51:00 AM

Hi Tom. A walk in a forest sounds wonderful, although I can't complain about today's weather. Showers are keeping it under 90. Window open to feel the cool breeze coming in over the lake. This form takes some focus, but was fun to write.