Lin Lane Poet Rhyme

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Rhymes in Nine Contest hosted by Joseph May ~ 9/4/24

Autumn is Harvest Time

Fall's bright colors are taking flight like birds on the wing
It's the right time for a clime change and seasonal transformation
brisk winds whisk leaves in plight and can no longer cling

Autumn sends a note that portends a change is in the air
Months of holidays and sublime door displays in celebration
of prime family feasts and Halloween beasts that surely scare

There are ripe fields to harvest with care and yields to measure
Nature conducts bright scenes as she gleans to write an orchestration
of Winter snows and light woolen clothes, a season to treasure

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Joseph May September 27, 2024 at 12:12 PM Wonderful write Lin, Congrats on your win Lin Lane September 28, 2024 at 4:35 AM Thank you very much for having a placement in your contest, Joseph. I appreciate your thoughtfulness.

Darlene De Beaulieu September 4, 2024 at 11:03 AM Hello Lin Lane, oh such a beautiful poem of autumn. yes it is a big change from summer to autumn. I notice the change now. the leaves are slowly changing colors. the children are back in school. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/ Darlene De Beaulieu September 7, 2024 at 10:25 AM Hellpo Lin lane you are a very good friend. Hugs. /darlene/ Darlene De Beaulieu September 5, 2024 at 8:01 AM Hello Lin, You will love the colours of the leaves. Hugs. /Darlene/ Lin Lane September 5, 2024 at 3:32 AM One day I'll make a drive up the East Coast in September or October to see the color changes for myself. Thanks, Darlene. Darlene De Beaulieu September 4, 2024 at 4:36 PM Hello Lin, The Evergreens trees are beautiful. i do like them. The leaves are begging to change color now. I live in Canada. We have 4 seasons. Summer, autumn winter and spring. Winter is the longest season. it never knows when to leave. Hugs my friend. /Darlene Lin Lane September 4, 2024 at 3:28 PM Hi Darlene. I don't get to see the changing colors of many trees here in the South, but don't mind the evergreen. Thanks, sweet friend.

Jay Narain September 4, 2024 at 10:23 AM Nice one. Lin Lane September 4, 2024 at 3:27 PM Thank you.

Tom Cunningham September 4, 2024 at 8:48 AM You rose well to the challenge Lin, just back from a walk in the forest. Hope your week is going well. Tom Lin Lane September 4, 2024 at 3:27 PM awww, Tom thank you for your loyal support. Tom Cunningham September 4, 2024 at 9:16 AM I don't think there's any form you can't do Lin, Lin Lane September 4, 2024 at 8:51 AM Hi Tom. A walk in a forest sounds wonderful, although I can't complain about today's weather. Showers are keeping it under 90. Window open to feel the cool breeze coming in over the lake. This form takes some focus, but was fun to write.