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He was on my bench, so I asked, are you watching the ducks? No, he said, I am watching the geese! We both had a big laugh at that, well they do look like ducks, I said. I sat down beside him to have a good look, not at the geese but at this man; this park bench thieve, this impostor. Oh, he was handsome with his dark hair, and pale face, a contrast to the fall leaves; we were quiet for a moment . . . He was on my bench, so I asked, are you watching the ducks? No, he said, I am watching the geese! Then we started talking, talking and talking, I told him I came to the park each day. He was new to the city and asked me questions, and being friendly, I offered to show him around. I talked about my favorite places to go, and he said lets go together; he was easy to talk to and I liked him a lot, we made plans to meet at the bench next day. He was on my bench, so I asked, are you watching the ducks? No, he said, I am watching the geese! Many days after we met in the park, we watched the leaves falling and collected a few; the air smelled so sweet and I was falling, falling in love with this beautiful man. And I think he loved me too, we liked to walk with the leaves crunching, and even when the rain was coming down. One day he bent down and kissed me. He was on my bench, so I asked, are you watching the ducks? No, he said, I am watching the geese! We fell in love among the rust-colored trees, and the leaf-strewn park and autumnal beauty. My heart and soul ached for his arms, and his breathtaking kisses fell on my lips. Oh I was smitten and lost in the aura of love, so when he bent on one knee and I asked me; will you marry me, I was ablaze like those leaves. Well, of course I said yes, yes, yes, my darling. He was on my bench, so I asked him, are you watching the ducks? No, he said, I am watching the geese! ______________________________ September 25, 2017 Verse/Autumn Is For Love Copyright Protected, ID 944594 Written for the contest, Autumn Romance sponsor, Julie Rodeheaver First Place

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Date: 10/22/2017 2:30:00 PM
A very romantic poem i enjoyed to read. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 10/21/2017 9:52:00 AM
A sweet touching write BW. You brought a smile to my face with your repeated lines.
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Date: 10/20/2017 3:26:00 PM
I love this, love it, Broken Wings
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Date: 10/3/2017 4:55:00 AM
I loved this :) A very well deserved win. Especially the two final lines made me smile.
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Date: 9/30/2017 9:18:00 PM
Very beautiful writing
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Date: 9/30/2017 4:16:00 PM
I'm back to congratulate you Broken Wings on your top placement with this fantastic poem. Beautiful.
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Date: 9/30/2017 11:43:00 AM
Romance is alive and well in your pen, congratulations Constance...
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Date: 9/30/2017 10:05:00 AM
Hi, Broken Wings. Congrats on your top placement. This is a beautiful piece.
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Date: 9/30/2017 7:29:00 AM
Wonderful pen! Swept me up in it, dear poetess. Congratulations on your win! Hugs and love mo :)
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Date: 9/29/2017 10:45:00 PM
Congratulations, BW on your fine win with this beautifully written romantic poem ...
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Date: 9/29/2017 9:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this appealing, romantic poem, Constance. Janice
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Date: 9/29/2017 9:04:00 PM
Lovely poem with a bit of humor. Enjoyed reading Constance much congratulations for your win.
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Date: 9/29/2017 3:25:00 PM
This is such a tender and beautiful love story Constance. Brava on your well deserved purse placement! : )
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Date: 9/29/2017 11:31:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your well-deserved First Place win! Sandra
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Date: 9/29/2017 8:24:00 AM
Congratulations for your great win! :)
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Date: 9/29/2017 5:32:00 AM
Congrats on your BIG win BW!
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Date: 9/29/2017 12:36:00 AM
Congratulations, Constance, for the win. a lovely narrative.
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Date: 9/28/2017 10:48:00 PM
Oh, so lovely and romantic, with a charming, old-fashioned delicacy - I love this one, BW, and it made me smile! I am very old-fashioned when it comes to romance, and the best of them progress with an unhurried but certain passion, as did this lovely poem! Congrats on your win! :-)
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Date: 9/27/2017 9:05:00 AM
Such a lovely, romantic poem, Constance. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/27/2017 12:47:00 AM
This is simply AMAZING, Constance. What a grand autumn love story.. FAVE
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Date: 9/27/2017 12:47:00 AM
the repeating lines were so perfect.
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Date: 9/26/2017 5:48:00 PM
So apart from an ordinary love story! I loved it! You write outside the box. My best, chuck
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Date: 9/25/2017 6:51:00 PM
Loved the romance in this poem...so what were they...ducks or geese?
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Date: 9/25/2017 5:42:00 PM
So lovely and romantic, told with a sweet touch of playfulness that hooked me from the first two lines. I love how you constructed your poem from the repeat of the first two lines throughout, to the repeat of words like; 'falling' in you third stanza and 'fell' in your fourth. I cheered when you said Yes ! lol! GL in the contest!
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Date: 9/25/2017 5:37:00 PM
Autumn is for love, as the leaves fall so does she for him. Good luck in the contest.
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