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Autumn Is For Love

He was on my bench, so I asked, are you watching the ducks?
No, he said, I am watching the geese!
We both had a big laugh at that,
well they do look like ducks, I said.
I sat down beside him to have a good look,
not at the  geese but at this man;
this park bench thieve, this impostor.
Oh, he was handsome with his dark hair,
and pale face, a contrast to the fall leaves;
we were quiet for a moment . . . 

He was on my bench, so I asked, are you watching the ducks?
No, he said, I am watching the geese! 
Then we started talking, talking and talking,
I told him I came to the park each day.
He was new to the city and asked me questions,
and being friendly, I offered to show him around.
I talked about my favorite places to go,
and he said lets go together;
he was easy to talk to and I liked him a lot,
we made plans to meet at the bench next day.

He was on my bench, so I asked, are you watching the ducks?
No, he said, I am watching the geese!
Many days after we met in the park,
we watched the leaves falling and collected a few;
the air smelled so sweet and I was falling,
falling in love with this beautiful man.
And I think he loved me too,
we liked to walk with the leaves crunching,
and even when the rain was coming down.
One day he bent down and kissed me.

He was on my bench, so I asked, are you watching the ducks?
No, he said, I am watching the geese!
We fell in love among the rust-colored trees,
and the leaf-strewn park and autumnal beauty.
My heart and soul ached for his arms,
and his breathtaking kisses fell on my lips.
Oh I was smitten and lost in the aura of love,
so when he bent on one knee and I asked me;
will you marry me, I was ablaze like those leaves.
Well, of course I said yes, yes, yes, my darling.

He was on my bench, so I asked him, are you watching the ducks?
No, he said, I am watching the geese!

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September 25, 2017

Verse/Autumn Is For Love
Copyright Protected, ID  944594


Written for the contest, Autumn Romance
sponsor, Julie Rodeheaver

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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De Beaulieu Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 2:30 PM
A very romantic poem i enjoyed to read. have a nice day my friend.
Inman Avatar
October 21, 2017 at 9:52 AM
A sweet touching write BW. You brought a smile to my face with your repeated lines.
Rebstock Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 3:26 PM
I love this, love it, Broken Wings
White Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 4:55 AM
I loved this :) A very well deserved win. Especially the two final lines made me smile.
Sharma Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 9:18 PM
Very beautiful writing
Ashley Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 4:16 PM
I'm back to congratulate you Broken Wings on your top placement with this fantastic poem. Beautiful.
Smith Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 11:43 AM
Romance is alive and well in your pen, congratulations Constance...
Johnson Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 10:05 AM
Hi, Broken Wings. Congrats on your top placement. This is a beautiful piece.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 7:29 AM
Wonderful pen! Swept me up in it, dear poetess. Congratulations on your win! Hugs and love mo :)
Gupta Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 10:45 PM
Congratulations, BW on your fine win with this beautifully written romantic poem ...
Canerdy Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 9:27 PM
Congratulations on your win with this appealing, romantic poem, Constance. Janice
Tor Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 9:04 PM
Lovely poem with a bit of humor. Enjoyed reading Constance much congratulations for your win.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 3:25 PM
This is such a tender and beautiful love story Constance. Brava on your well deserved purse placement! : )
Haight Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 11:31 AM
Back to congratulate you on your well-deserved First Place win! Sandra
Sands Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 8:24 AM
Congratulations for your great win! :)
Pandit Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 5:32 AM
Congrats on your BIG win BW!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 12:36 AM
Congratulations, Constance, for the win. a lovely narrative.
Barden Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 10:48 PM
Oh, so lovely and romantic, with a charming, old-fashioned delicacy - I love this one, BW, and it made me smile! I am very old-fashioned when it comes to romance, and the best of them progress with an unhurried but certain passion, as did this lovely poem! Congrats on your win! :-)
Haight Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 9:05 AM
Such a lovely, romantic poem, Constance. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 12:47 AM
the repeating lines were so perfect.
Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 12:47 AM
This is simply AMAZING, Constance. What a grand autumn love story.. FAVE
Melugin Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 5:48 PM
So apart from an ordinary love story! I loved it! You write outside the box. My best, chuck
Parker Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 6:51 PM
Loved the romance in this poem...so what were they...ducks or geese?
Ashley Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 5:42 PM
So lovely and romantic, told with a sweet touch of playfulness that hooked me from the first two lines. I love how you constructed your poem from the repeat of the first two lines throughout, to the repeat of words like; 'falling' in you third stanza and 'fell' in your fourth. I cheered when you said Yes ! lol! GL in the contest!
Capitano Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 5:37 PM
Autumn is for love, as the leaves fall so does she for him. Good luck in the contest.
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