Autumn In Our City, City In Our Autumn

Our sun is weak
In efforts to fill up our sky today
It’s bleak, a softness of gray marches in
Blanketing our forecast
Mild autumn, cool breeze	
Peaceful, rolling low
Dead leaves sweeping around
New pavement cracking ground
An acoustic dance they tap
Out comes a rustling beat
Chasing one another gracefully
Down our city streets
Boisterous hoards of vehicles
Slither and hiss
Creeping their way through
Our city grid
Every so often
Muscular trumpet engines, become outdone

Let’s revert to a momentary handsome jungle scene
Watch and listen with care
As we relish an obtuse family of king elephant’s, trembling 
Warring a melancholy parade
Through mothers natural bad lands
Hammering earths ground 
With their massive bone crunching feet
Wake up; shake off your visionary nod
Back to the sounds, back to the sights
Back to our tender autumn city nights

A Bass filled honorable horn
Explodes and stretches
Out from an engine train
Vividly flexible slithering through our city
Bouncing off buildings, rolling down alleys
Sliding down rooftops, through slivered windows
Into our homes
As I sit back and observe
This miraculous painting
Of a finely stroked autumn day
I fall in love with the sights and sounds
Which bark and cruise upon her canvas spread
Graceful or not
Beautiful and ugly
Spills or mishaps
O thou spices of our lives
Beauty has been splashed
Upon this land, mighty grand
Even to a family of three or four
So small a note
To the makeup of her….masterpiece composer
Are we grateful? Are we selfish full of lingering lust?
A low storm hungry,
Rolling over grand mountains
Nearly black, pushing east
A shimmering assault of rain shall be released
Once her sky opens up
Like soldiers Para jumping
From a gang of war planes
I render it’s still a bit to warm
For a christening of our seasons first snow
I guess…… you never know
The wildness that can bleed out of our autumn city streets
As we plant future angelic seeds

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 8/2/2011 10:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Adam. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/28/2011 10:36:00 AM
Congratulations and well done, I enjoyed reading
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Date: 6/28/2011 5:32:00 AM
My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Adam
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Date: 6/28/2011 5:31:00 AM
My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Adam
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Date: 6/27/2011 5:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your well written poetry being featured this week Adam. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/26/2011 9:44:00 PM
Congrats Adam on your featured poem this week on PS ..an amazing piece to share with luv..
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Date: 6/26/2011 5:18:00 PM
My congratulations on your poem being featured this week,
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Date: 2/11/2011 10:01:00 AM
Good one...I could hear the sounds through your descriptive work..Sara
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