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Autumn Haiku

Silence in her eyes
Death arrives on Autumn wind
Mother Nature cries

Contest: Trashed #3
Sponsor: Broken Wings
Written: 10/22/2015
By: Greg Hoffman

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Jan Allison

November 9, 2015 at 1:33 PM

so pleased to see this place in the trashed contest Greg:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A

November 9, 2015 at 11:08 AM

Greg, Congratulations on your Trashed #3 win. SKAT

Paul Callus

October 26, 2015 at 6:31 PM

Well done, Greg! In my eyes this is a winner! Excellent personification. ~ All the best. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

October 24, 2015 at 7:58 AM

I really like the way you had a theme and carried it through with your Ku!

Jan Allison

October 22, 2015 at 8:20 AM

lovely haiku with great personification - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

October 22, 2015 at 8:08 AM

Greg, this is quite lovely. You've managed to give Mother Nature the warm personification of a human mother. Well done! ~ Lin ~

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