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Autumn Haiku

Silence in her eyes Death arrives on Autumn wind Mother Nature cries Contest: Trashed #3 Sponsor: Broken Wings Written: 10/22/2015 By: Greg Hoffman

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Date: 11/9/2015 1:33:00 PM

so pleased to see this place in the trashed contest Greg:-) hugs Jan xx

Date: 11/9/2015 11:08:00 AM

Greg, Congratulations on your Trashed #3 win. SKAT

Date: 10/26/2015 6:31:00 PM

Well done, Greg! In my eyes this is a winner! Excellent personification. ~ All the best. // paul

Date: 10/24/2015 7:58:00 AM

I really like the way you had a theme and carried it through with your Ku!

Date: 10/22/2015 8:20:00 AM

lovely haiku with great personification - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Date: 10/22/2015 8:08:00 AM

Greg, this is quite lovely. You've managed to give Mother Nature the warm personification of a human mother. Well done! ~ Lin ~