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Grateful thanks to Demetrios for helping me to make my haiku even better by amending the final line:-)

withered leaves falling carpet of autumnal bliss adorning the ground Jan Allison 23rd October 2014

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Date: 10/24/2014 3:12:00 PM
Nice haiku! You stuck to the 5 75 haiku form - which is all to the good. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 10/24/2014 3:17:00 PM
Thanks for the lovely comment Matthew - i always use the 5 7 5 format:-) Hugs jan xxx
Date: 10/24/2014 11:09:00 AM
such a beautiful picture jan you painted
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Date: 10/24/2014 12:14:00 PM
Thanks so much for the lovely comment Liam:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/24/2014 5:38:00 AM
A wonderful Haiku worthy of Autumn! Excellent, dear Jan! Hugs
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Date: 10/24/2014 7:32:00 AM
Thank you so much Demetrios:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 10/24/2014 12:13:00 AM
I agree Jan...autumn is bliss!
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Date: 10/24/2014 2:54:00 AM
Thanks for dropping by to comment Connie:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 10/23/2014 8:55:00 PM
Sounds like you seen my front yard Jan. Nice Haiku.
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Date: 10/24/2014 2:53:00 AM
LOL Brenda thanks for dropping by:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 10/23/2014 5:08:00 PM
They truly are "nocturnal bliss".
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Date: 10/23/2014 5:10:00 PM
Thanks for dropping by ML Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 10/23/2014 4:26:00 PM
Nice description of autumn in this haiku. Leaves are almost all down here in Sask. and I am not looking forward to snow. love phyl
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Date: 10/23/2014 4:31:00 PM
yes same here on the Isle of Man where I live - hopefully we won't get snow this year:-) hugs Jan xxx
Date: 10/23/2014 3:58:00 PM
Love this Autumn Haiku Jan, my favourite season captured splendidly in your words, James :) xx
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Date: 10/23/2014 4:28:00 PM
Understandable when you look outside, it's very hard not to, James xxxx
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Date: 10/23/2014 4:01:00 PM
Thanks James I'm having an autumnal day have written two poems on it today:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/23/2014 11:18:00 AM
- Lovely haiku, dear Jan ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/23/2014 11:20:00 AM
Thanks so much Anne Lise - yours this morning was simply exquisite:-) hugs Jan xxx
Date: 10/23/2014 10:44:00 AM
Nice picture of autumn, I live in florida so it's a carpet I don't have to clean any more
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Date: 10/23/2014 10:56:00 AM
Oh Florida how simply wonderful. I've visited twice - such a beautiful beautiful place:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 10/23/2014 10:03:00 AM
A well veiled sexual metaphor. Withered and falling your lover leaves. Your neighbor Greg Autumnal drops in for a cup of sugar. You give it to him. Right there in the living room. Carpet of Autumnal bliss lying on the ground sexually spent. One heck of a nature haiku because after all it is our nature to love. Or it has something to do with autumn? Haha, wink, wink, nod,nod, say no more, say no more...
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Date: 10/23/2014 10:29:00 AM
Shhhhh Maurice my dear you are giving away all my secrets! Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 10/23/2014 9:26:00 AM
favouring this one..I really love the imagery dear
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Date: 10/23/2014 10:27:00 AM
Thanks so much Charmaine:-) Hugs jan xxx
Date: 10/23/2014 8:34:00 AM
Autumn leaves or so beautiful, but I do hate raking them :) love eve
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Date: 10/23/2014 8:35:00 AM
Me too Eve but its a stunning time of the year isn't it:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/23/2014 8:15:00 AM
Autumn beautifully captured in this exquisite haiku Jan hugs
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Date: 10/23/2014 8:15:00 AM
Many thanks Shadow for your lovely comment:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/23/2014 8:06:00 AM
Beautiful haiku Jan...I love autumn...hugs Tim
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Date: 10/23/2014 8:08:00 AM
Thanks Tim, each season brings its own unique delights:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/23/2014 8:02:00 AM
Nice :) crispy carpet we don't have to vacuum ;) hugs
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Date: 10/23/2014 8:07:00 AM
Thanks Cas for dropping by:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 10/23/2014 7:59:00 AM
A very good haiku, Jan- a rare tribute to fall. love....rajat
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 10/23/2014 8:00:00 AM
Thanks Rajat it is a beautiful time of the year:-) Hugs Jan x