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Autumn Haiku 3 2 1

zephyr breeze
gently
blows

in autumn
watch leaves
fall

small hedgehog
rustles
leaves

brown conkers
drop to
ground

tangerine
sunset
glows


haiku 123 or 321 contest
Sponsored by Charles Messina

9/22/18

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Eve Roper Date: 10/10/2018 9:17:00 PM Back with congratulations on your win. <3 Login to Reply

Augustus Black Date: 10/10/2018 6:40:00 AM So touching.. and beautiful... I like this season. Jan .. Congratulation for the win.. Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/10/2018 6:01:00 AM Verse 3 is my favorite! Congrats, Jan! Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 10/9/2018 10:40:00 PM Back with congratulations Jan. Tom. Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 10/9/2018 10:18:00 PM Back to congratulate you, Jan:) beautiful write:) Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 10/9/2018 4:59:00 PM Back with congratulations, Jan....Top of the Pops:) Hugs // paul Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 10/9/2018 2:39:00 PM bright are your autumn colors, jan... congrats on your big win!...huggs Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/9/2018 11:51:00 AM - Congratulations Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 10/9/2018 11:39:00 AM Delightful, Jan. Congrats on your much deserved gold medal win. Login to Reply

Warren Doll Date: 10/9/2018 9:42:00 AM So beautiful. Congratulations on your win, Jan. Login to Reply

Charles Messina Date: 10/9/2018 8:56:00 AM Wow Jan, this is so well done. You too have mastered this new form. Congratulations on your 1st place win and thanks for entering my contest. Hugs Charlieku :) Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 9/27/2018 9:37:00 AM I loved yours, Jan:) Login to Reply

Arthur Vaso Date: 9/25/2018 12:29:00 AM ahhh this was very beautiful Jan! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/24/2018 6:27:00 PM Lovely set, Jan . i have mine ready too but gosh, there is so little response lately! I am sitting on six poems right now and want to work on eight more!! Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 9/24/2018 2:53:00 PM You have projected some truly beautiful autumn images, Jan. Good luck in the contest. Hugs // paul Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 9/24/2018 9:17:00 AM Reads like a good contender..Way to go ...Thanks for the visit to my page. I enjoyed reading this one and the pics are lovely. Sara Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/12/2018 7:06:00 PM Thanks Sara:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/24/2018 12:44:00 AM - The pearls of the autumn, Jan :) - Sorry, I have not been to the "soup" lately - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/12/2018 7:05:00 PM I've not been too active either Anne-Lise still playing catch up!:-( hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 9/23/2018 8:07:00 PM These are just beautiful Jan. They drip off the tongue like honey. Love them! : ) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/12/2018 7:05:00 PM Aw thanks Connie:-) hugs Jan xx

Susan Ashley Date: 9/23/2018 7:51:00 PM Such beautiful imagery adorns your string of haiku gems, Jan. Best wishes for a win.. I give bonus points for the cute hedgehog :)) ~Susan Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/12/2018 7:02:00 PM Thanks Susan:-) hugs Jan xx

M. L. Kiser Date: 9/23/2018 3:49:00 PM I especially love the ending on this one; a great poem. Good luck in the contests. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/12/2018 7:02:00 PM Thanks so much ML:-):-) hugs Jan xx

Michelle Faulkner Date: 9/23/2018 3:41:00 PM Ooh, really like the 'small hedgehogs,' so cute! 'tangerine sunset glows,' - bee-u-tee-ful! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/12/2018 7:01:00 PM thanks Michelle:-) hugs jan xx

Ralph Sergi Date: 9/23/2018 9:39:00 AM A beautiful haiku, Jan: GOOD LUCK! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/12/2018 7:00:00 PM Thanks so much Ralph:-) hugs Jan xx

Mahtab Bangalee Date: 9/23/2018 4:37:00 AM superb nature in haiku Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/12/2018 7:00:00 PM Thanks:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham Date: 9/23/2018 12:48:00 AM Nice autumn haiku Jan. Good luck. Tom. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/12/2018 5:19:00 PM Thanks so much Tom:-) hugs Jan xx

Caren Krutsinger Date: 9/22/2018 11:08:00 PM very pretty, good luck in the contest, Jan. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/12/2018 5:17:00 PM Thanks so much Caren:-) hugs Jan xx

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