Jan Allison Poet Haiku

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Autumn Haiku 3 2 1

zephyr breeze
gently
blows

in autumn
watch leaves
fall

small hedgehog
rustles
leaves

brown conkers
drop to
ground

tangerine
sunset
glows


haiku 123 or 321 contest
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9/22/18

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Eve Roper October 10, 2018 at 9:17 PM Back with congratulations on your win. <3

Augustus Black October 10, 2018 at 6:40 AM So touching.. and beautiful... I like this season. Jan .. Congratulation for the win..

Kim Rodrigues October 10, 2018 at 6:01 AM Verse 3 is my favorite! Congrats, Jan!

Tom Cunningham October 9, 2018 at 10:40 PM Back with congratulations Jan. Tom.

Joanna Daniel October 9, 2018 at 10:18 PM Back to congratulate you, Jan:) beautiful write:)

Paul Callus October 9, 2018 at 4:59 PM Back with congratulations, Jan....Top of the Pops:) Hugs // paul

Nette Onclaud October 9, 2018 at 2:39 PM bright are your autumn colors, jan... congrats on your big win!...huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen October 9, 2018 at 11:51 AM - Congratulations Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier October 9, 2018 at 11:39 AM Delightful, Jan. Congrats on your much deserved gold medal win.

Warren Doll October 9, 2018 at 9:42 AM So beautiful. Congratulations on your win, Jan.

Charles Messina October 9, 2018 at 8:56 AM Wow Jan, this is so well done. You too have mastered this new form. Congratulations on your 1st place win and thanks for entering my contest. Hugs Charlieku :)

Joanna Daniel September 27, 2018 at 9:37 AM I loved yours, Jan:)

Arthur Vaso September 25, 2018 at 12:29 AM ahhh this was very beautiful Jan!

Andrea Dietrich September 24, 2018 at 6:27 PM Lovely set, Jan . i have mine ready too but gosh, there is so little response lately! I am sitting on six poems right now and want to work on eight more!!

Paul Callus September 24, 2018 at 2:53 PM You have projected some truly beautiful autumn images, Jan. Good luck in the contest. Hugs // paul

Sara Kendrick September 24, 2018 at 9:17 AM Reads like a good contender..Way to go ...Thanks for the visit to my page. I enjoyed reading this one and the pics are lovely. Sara Jan Allison October 12, 2018 at 7:06 PM Thanks Sara:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen September 24, 2018 at 12:44 AM - The pearls of the autumn, Jan :) - Sorry, I have not been to the "soup" lately - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison October 12, 2018 at 7:05 PM I've not been too active either Anne-Lise still playing catch up!:-( hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong September 23, 2018 at 8:07 PM These are just beautiful Jan. They drip off the tongue like honey. Love them! : ) Jan Allison October 12, 2018 at 7:05 PM Aw thanks Connie:-) hugs Jan xx

Susan Ashley September 23, 2018 at 7:51 PM Such beautiful imagery adorns your string of haiku gems, Jan. Best wishes for a win.. I give bonus points for the cute hedgehog :)) ~Susan Jan Allison October 12, 2018 at 7:02 PM Thanks Susan:-) hugs Jan xx

M. L. Kiser September 23, 2018 at 3:49 PM I especially love the ending on this one; a great poem. Good luck in the contests. Jan Allison October 12, 2018 at 7:02 PM Thanks so much ML:-):-) hugs Jan xx

Michelle Faulkner September 23, 2018 at 3:41 PM Ooh, really like the 'small hedgehogs,' so cute! 'tangerine sunset glows,' - bee-u-tee-ful! Jan Allison October 12, 2018 at 7:01 PM thanks Michelle:-) hugs jan xx

Ralph Sergi September 23, 2018 at 9:39 AM A beautiful haiku, Jan: GOOD LUCK! Jan Allison October 12, 2018 at 7:00 PM Thanks so much Ralph:-) hugs Jan xx

Mahtab Bangalee September 23, 2018 at 4:37 AM superb nature in haiku Jan Allison October 12, 2018 at 7:00 PM Thanks:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham September 23, 2018 at 12:48 AM Nice autumn haiku Jan. Good luck. Tom. Jan Allison October 12, 2018 at 5:19 PM Thanks so much Tom:-) hugs Jan xx

Caren Krutsinger September 22, 2018 at 11:08 PM very pretty, good luck in the contest, Jan. Jan Allison October 12, 2018 at 5:17 PM Thanks so much Caren:-) hugs Jan xx

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