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zephyr breeze gently blows in autumn watch leaves fall small hedgehog rustles leaves brown conkers drop to ground tangerine sunset glows haiku 123 or 321 contest Sponsored by Charles Messina 9/22/18

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Date: 10/10/2018 9:17:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your win. <3
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Date: 10/10/2018 6:40:00 AM
So touching.. and beautiful... I like this season. Jan .. Congratulation for the win..
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Date: 10/10/2018 6:01:00 AM
Verse 3 is my favorite! Congrats, Jan!
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Date: 10/9/2018 10:40:00 PM
Back with congratulations Jan. Tom.
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Date: 10/9/2018 10:18:00 PM
Back to congratulate you, Jan:) beautiful write:)
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Date: 10/9/2018 4:59:00 PM
Back with congratulations, Jan....Top of the Pops:) Hugs // paul
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Date: 10/9/2018 2:39:00 PM
bright are your autumn colors, jan... congrats on your big win!...huggs
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Date: 10/9/2018 11:51:00 AM
- Congratulations Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/9/2018 11:39:00 AM
Delightful, Jan. Congrats on your much deserved gold medal win.
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Date: 10/9/2018 9:42:00 AM
So beautiful. Congratulations on your win, Jan.
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Date: 10/9/2018 8:56:00 AM
Wow Jan, this is so well done. You too have mastered this new form. Congratulations on your 1st place win and thanks for entering my contest. Hugs Charlieku :)
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Date: 9/27/2018 9:37:00 AM
I loved yours, Jan:)
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Date: 9/25/2018 12:29:00 AM
ahhh this was very beautiful Jan!
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Date: 9/24/2018 6:27:00 PM
Lovely set, Jan . i have mine ready too but gosh, there is so little response lately! I am sitting on six poems right now and want to work on eight more!!
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Date: 9/24/2018 2:53:00 PM
You have projected some truly beautiful autumn images, Jan. Good luck in the contest. Hugs // paul
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Date: 9/24/2018 9:17:00 AM
Reads like a good contender..Way to go ...Thanks for the visit to my page. I enjoyed reading this one and the pics are lovely. Sara
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Date: 10/12/2018 7:06:00 PM
Thanks Sara:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/24/2018 12:44:00 AM
- The pearls of the autumn, Jan :) - Sorry, I have not been to the "soup" lately - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/12/2018 7:05:00 PM
I've not been too active either Anne-Lise still playing catch up!:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/23/2018 8:07:00 PM
These are just beautiful Jan. They drip off the tongue like honey. Love them! : )
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Date: 10/12/2018 7:05:00 PM
Aw thanks Connie:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/23/2018 7:51:00 PM
Such beautiful imagery adorns your string of haiku gems, Jan. Best wishes for a win.. I give bonus points for the cute hedgehog :)) ~Susan
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Date: 10/12/2018 7:02:00 PM
Thanks Susan:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/23/2018 3:49:00 PM
I especially love the ending on this one; a great poem. Good luck in the contests.
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Date: 10/12/2018 7:02:00 PM
Thanks so much ML:-):-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/23/2018 3:41:00 PM
Ooh, really like the 'small hedgehogs,' so cute! 'tangerine sunset glows,' - bee-u-tee-ful!
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Date: 10/12/2018 7:01:00 PM
thanks Michelle:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/23/2018 9:39:00 AM
A beautiful haiku, Jan: GOOD LUCK!
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Date: 10/12/2018 7:00:00 PM
Thanks so much Ralph:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/23/2018 4:37:00 AM
superb nature in haiku
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Date: 10/12/2018 7:00:00 PM
Thanks:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/23/2018 12:48:00 AM
Nice autumn haiku Jan. Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 10/12/2018 5:19:00 PM
Thanks so much Tom:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/22/2018 11:08:00 PM
very pretty, good luck in the contest, Jan.
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Date: 10/12/2018 5:17:00 PM
Thanks so much Caren:-) hugs Jan xx
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