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Second Autumn. Poetry | by Vaishali Paliwal | Weeds & Wildflowers | Medium

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*Image of Second Autumn by Medium. Autumn Fuse Twas an Autumn pink, when my heart did sink, she had alleged, loving has edged, Twas an Autumn blue, when I'd heard tis true, let us not stall, it's on the wall, Twas an Autumn red, when you'd always said, it's not exact, it won't yield back, Twas an Autumn gray when I heard you say, that we are through, I'm done with you, Twas an Autumn black an old friend named Jack, intro'd my girl, who was my world, Now that winter has come around, a lamb was lost; a man was found. 2022 August 26

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Date: 8/26/2022 5:00:00 PM
I love the use of colored refrain. Very nice ~ Kim
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Date: 8/26/2022 5:22:00 PM
A mood clarifier here, Kim, thanks for your noted share, Aloha~William

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