White Wolf Poet Rhyme

Autumn Fire:

If only my soul could express,
The way I feel in autumns caress,
With its beauty, it's so stifling,
Thou heart joins in and wants to sing,
Its vast colours reflecting in depth,
As leaves start turning in different specks,
If spring is the bringer, then autumns the seer.
And if the sun could it would shed a tear,
For the autumn fire burns in me so,
From all four seasons, it's the hardest to let go.
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(10/25/2016)

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Andrea Dietrich October 25, 2016 at 3:41 PM oooh, that one line is so awesome: If summer is the bringer, autumn is the seer! You did very well with this challenge. It's on my to do list for this week!! White Wolf October 25, 2016 at 6:18 PM Thanks Andrea, have a great day x Budgie /|\

Nette Onclaud October 25, 2016 at 1:03 PM ohh, these lines are aflame with autumn's glory.. finely done, rick..huggs White Wolf October 25, 2016 at 6:16 PM Thanks Nette for your positive feedback /|\

Eve Roper October 25, 2016 at 10:40 AM This is very beautifully written, Rick, good luck in the contest Hugs Eve White Wolf October 25, 2016 at 6:15 PM Thanks Eve, as long as everyone else stays out of it I'll win, Haha. Thanks again /|\

Kay Roberts October 25, 2016 at 7:53 AM Oh Rick......... This has really touched me. It's beautiful. White Wolf October 25, 2016 at 8:01 AM To be fair I like three out of four seasons, winter is just too cold for me. I'm glad it made you feel that way, Kay. Mission accomplished! Haha. /|\

Probir Gupta October 25, 2016 at 6:40 AM Enjoyed reading ... a nice poem ... White Wolf October 25, 2016 at 7:10 AM Thanks Probir /|\