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Autumn Eventide

autumn eventide drowsy autumn yawns early darkness stunts her days ~ twilight mellow haze cool evening dozes autumn savors frost in dusk ~ scarlet afterglow fading eventide croons a sunset lullaby ~ sweet spice of autumn sleepy autumn eyes daylight slips into midnight ~ vesper barcarolles hectic harvest time abundant crops gathered in ~ amber moon rises autumn gently snores cornucopia dreams ~ astral autumn fields 11-11-22 syllables checked with www.howmanysyllables

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/16/2022 12:49:00 PM

so pretty. My favorite was the last one with the snores!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/18/2022 12:42:00 PM

Thank you Andrea! I just couldn't resist the image of autumn gently snoring as fall is carried into hibernation! I am so glad you liked this one. I think it has become a favored child! Blessings of sweet harvest dreams to you!

Valsa George

Date: 11/14/2022 1:22:00 AM

Sam, your haiku's are a class in themselves ! From yawing to dosing, then falling asleep and snoring. What wonderrful progression. Congratulations on your well deserved win !

Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/14/2022 1:27:00 PM

Dearest Valsa, I am so humbled and honored by your wonderful feedback and your congratulations. It has been such an enjoyable experience to learn to write haiku - to paint a picture in seventeen syllables and stir emotion in the heart. I love the thought of autumn getting for bed - cozy, slipping into dreams as the days grow shorter, the nights longer and the world continuing its change as winter approaches! Thank you for sharing the autumn bedtime story dear friend. Sending you blessings, sweet dreams!

Lonna Blodgett

Date: 11/13/2022 6:29:00 PM

Love the comfort and gentle description. It seems to intrinsically depict the season I love so very much. Lonna

Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/14/2022 1:19:00 PM

Many thanks for your lovely feedback. I too love autumn and after all of its initial activity I do think it needs a nap and a peaceful night to rejuvenate for the spring! And, I agree, there is a gentleness about the autumn transition even as fall storms arrive. Take good care. Blessings!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/13/2022 11:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your winner. Sara

Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/14/2022 1:15:00 PM

Sara, many thanks for your congratulations! Sending you all the blessings of the season!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/12/2022 11:27:00 AM

A wonderful string of autumn haiku Sam. I hope you are keeping well. Over Fork Over and enjoy the weekend. Tom

Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/12/2022 10:57:00 PM

Thank you so much Tom! Had fun with this one - only one problem, now I want to curl up for a nap! Hope you are having a great weekend! All is well. Hope you are doing the same. Over Fork Over!!