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Autumn Equinox

Suns brief interlude...
                                 Balancing the day and night...
                                       An equator kissed.

autumnhaiku

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Suzanne Delaney

Date: 10/24/2021 4:44:00 PM

Paulette: This captures the slanting light of Autumn as it kisses the Equator. Beautiful Haiku. Best, SuZ

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/25/2021 9:32:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely comment! Blessings, Paulette

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/17/2021 4:11:00 AM

delicate and pretty

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/18/2021 8:32:00 AM

I like to imagine the Sun with it's infinite power to be the gentle giant of our universe. Thanks for stopping by. Blessings, Paulette

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/16/2021 7:52:00 PM

beautiful imagery ~

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/18/2021 8:32:00 AM

Thank you Line, glad you enjoyed the imagery... Blessings, Paulette

Jan Allison

Date: 10/16/2021 5:21:00 PM

what a super haiku Paulette:-) hugs Jan xx

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/16/2021 6:42:00 PM

Thanks Jan.... Hugs to you Too.... Paulette

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/16/2021 2:31:00 PM

- A great haiku ... a skilled final line ... I love haiku poems ... in a few words ... much said:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/16/2021 6:47:00 PM

Anne-Lise ,Glad you enjoyed it.....I agree, Haiku's are one of my favorites forms too....expression without a lot of words. Hugs to you too, Paulette

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/16/2021 11:57:00 AM

And how globally this is present - we have two as do we all and the times and dates perfectly balanced as you so eloquently an creatively describe Paulette. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/16/2021 12:54:00 PM

Hi Jennifer, Yes, indeed a fun write. I appreciate your commenting with such high praise. Blessings, Paulette

Eve Roper

Date: 10/15/2021 7:38:00 PM

equator kissed.. perfect

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/16/2021 12:55:00 PM

Thank you Eve.....I thought "equator kissed" said it all. Blessings, Paulette

Joe Dimino

Date: 10/15/2021 3:47:00 PM

Best way to start a day. Ah, how well I remember such days...and nights. I think you are right (balance or Equinox)-- horizons always the most interesting...I have forgotten many a day and night -- but never an horizon shared with someone content to just sit and linger -- share the oblivion of pure space and time.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/16/2021 1:03:00 PM

Hi Joe, Yes, the balance is brief but you are quite right about sharing "the oblivion of pure space and time". Blessings, Paulette