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Autumn Equinox

Suns brief interlude...
                                 Balancing the day and night...
                                       An equator kissed.

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Suzanne Delaney

October 24, 2021 at 4:44 PM

Paulette: This captures the slanting light of Autumn as it kisses the Equator. Beautiful Haiku. Best, SuZ

Paulette Calasibetta

October 25, 2021 at 9:32 AM

Thank you for your lovely comment! Blessings, Paulette

Caren Krutsinger

October 17, 2021 at 4:11 AM

delicate and pretty

Paulette Calasibetta

October 18, 2021 at 8:32 AM

I like to imagine the Sun with it's infinite power to be the gentle giant of our universe. Thanks for stopping by. Blessings, Paulette

Line Gauthier

October 16, 2021 at 7:52 PM

beautiful imagery ~

Paulette Calasibetta

October 18, 2021 at 8:32 AM

Thank you Line, glad you enjoyed the imagery... Blessings, Paulette

Jan Allison

October 16, 2021 at 5:21 PM

what a super haiku Paulette:-) hugs Jan xx

Paulette Calasibetta

October 16, 2021 at 6:42 PM

Thanks Jan.... Hugs to you Too.... Paulette

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 16, 2021 at 2:31 PM

- A great haiku ... a skilled final line ... I love haiku poems ... in a few words ... much said:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paulette Calasibetta

October 16, 2021 at 6:47 PM

Anne-Lise ,Glad you enjoyed it.....I agree, Haiku's are one of my favorites forms too....expression without a lot of words. Hugs to you too, Paulette

Jennifer Proxenos

October 16, 2021 at 11:57 AM

And how globally this is present - we have two as do we all and the times and dates perfectly balanced as you so eloquently an creatively describe Paulette. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Paulette Calasibetta

October 16, 2021 at 12:54 PM

Hi Jennifer, Yes, indeed a fun write. I appreciate your commenting with such high praise. Blessings, Paulette

Eve Roper

October 15, 2021 at 7:38 PM

equator kissed.. perfect

Paulette Calasibetta

October 16, 2021 at 12:55 PM

Thank you Eve.....I thought "equator kissed" said it all. Blessings, Paulette

Joseph P. DiMino

October 15, 2021 at 3:47 PM

Best way to start a day. Ah, how well I remember such days...and nights. I think you are right (balance or Equinox)-- horizons always the most interesting...I have forgotten many a day and night -- but never an horizon shared with someone content to just sit and linger -- share the oblivion of pure space and time.

Paulette Calasibetta

October 16, 2021 at 1:03 PM

Hi Joe, Yes, the balance is brief but you are quite right about sharing "the oblivion of pure space and time". Blessings, Paulette