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Autumn Dream

Written: November 12, 2023, For JCB Brul Contest __________________________________________ With a balmy wind nature sings its symphony~ as leaves dance above Life's cycle will trounce autumn saffron hemming without dread Notice twigs slight fall autumn's mind-astounding grace~ embrace spell lyric as nature's croon blithely spread trees sway in hone symphony

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Beata Agustin

Date: 11/24/2023 11:08:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... You've made me vicariously experience Autumn in my "Autumnless" country. God bless you.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 11/24/2023 6:13:00 PM

You and I have to learn my friend, when a sponsor says ONE they mean one... I think I have finally learned after many N/As.. But I loved your poem. ( I loved mine too). Cheers. Wen

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 11/15/2023 2:21:00 PM

Beautiful, Tanka, Sotto: This beautiful line,~ autumn's mind-astounding grace~ captures the essence of Fall in all its grandeur. Cheers, Su

Smita Kulkarni

Date: 11/14/2023 1:18:00 PM

Beautiful imagery of autumn! Loved reading it!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/13/2023 6:30:00 AM

Simply awesome--beautiful images, my friend. A FAVE!

Eve Roper

Date: 11/12/2023 10:43:00 PM

Great imagery and feeling in your poem,Lasaad. Enjoyed reading my friend. Many blessings your way my friend.

Mulu Magdalinos

Date: 11/12/2023 2:09:00 PM

Hello Sotto, beautiful Tanka poems!! Have a blessed day!

Ink Empress

Date: 11/12/2023 1:47:00 PM

Dear Sotto, as always this is such a stunning magical poem woven in such eloquence, despite few syllables, you’ve certainly delivered such brilliant flow of exquisite imagery; your beautiful double tanka shows that amidst changes etc how balmy wind can be as nature sings their own symphony: i love saffron line and also twigs like, as well as natures croon.. such an ethereal and delicate take from you: pleasure reading this. Ink

Paige Hind

Date: 11/12/2023 1:39:00 PM

Very lovely...

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/12/2023 12:57:00 PM

dearest Sotto--an artistic Tanka, my poet friend. I loved "nature sings it symphony" and "autumn's mind-astounding grace." You've definitely captured the 'dreamy' quality of autumn in all its glory. Well done, Sir :-) enjoy your Sunday, Sara

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/12/2023 11:19:00 AM

Very descriptive and expressive are these tanka poems. Thanks for sharing them with us and for dropping by my pages. Sara K