Autumn Dream

Written: November 12, 2023, For JCB Brul Contest __________________________________________ With a balmy wind nature sings its symphony~ as leaves dance above Life's cycle will trounce autumn saffron hemming without dread Notice twigs slight fall autumn's mind-astounding grace~ embrace spell lyric as nature's croon blithely spread trees sway in hone symphony
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Agustin Avatar
November 24, 2023 at 11:08 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... You've made me vicariously experience Autumn in my "Autumnless" country. God bless you.
Volumes Avatar
November 24, 2023 at 6:13 PM
You and I have to learn my friend, when a sponsor says ONE they mean one... I think I have finally learned after many N/As.. But I loved your poem. ( I loved mine too). Cheers. Wen
Delaney Avatar
November 15, 2023 at 2:21 PM
Beautiful, Tanka, Sotto: This beautiful line,~ autumn's mind-astounding grace~ captures the essence of Fall in all its grandeur. Cheers, Su
Kulkarni Avatar
November 14, 2023 at 1:18 PM
Beautiful imagery of autumn! Loved reading it!
Pandit Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 6:30 AM
Simply awesome--beautiful images, my friend. A FAVE!
Roper Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 10:43 PM
Great imagery and feeling in your poem,Lasaad. Enjoyed reading my friend. Many blessings your way my friend.
Magdalinos Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 2:09 PM
Hello Sotto, beautiful Tanka poems!! Have a blessed day!
Empress Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 1:47 PM
Dear Sotto, as always this is such a stunning magical poem woven in such eloquence, despite few syllables, you’ve certainly delivered such brilliant flow of exquisite imagery; your beautiful double tanka shows that amidst changes etc how balmy wind can be as nature sings their own symphony: i love saffron line and also twigs like, as well as natures croon.. such an ethereal and delicate take from you: pleasure reading this. Ink
Hind Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 1:39 PM
Very lovely...
Kendrick Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 11:19 AM
Very descriptive and expressive are these tanka poems. Thanks for sharing them with us and for dropping by my pages. Sara K
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