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Autumn Day

Darkened skies That cloaks the night, slowly fade away And the melodic songs of birds, are heard Heralding a bright new day As the earth begins to feel the warmth Of a sultry, soft sun’s heat Morning mists envelop the ground Like a pure white silken sheet From beneath the shroud, rustling is heard As small creatures leave their lairs Scurrying around, on their hunt for food That will be their winter fayre Berries, nuts and soft ripe fruit Abundant on bushes and trees Will be harvested and stored away To sustain through winter’s freeze Dawn’s crisp frost begins to melt And a tapestry of colour is seen Of lustrous reds, orange, yellows and gold As nature changes from summer’s green There’s a nip in the air, A chill in the breeze, rustling through the trees Creating a kaleidoscope snowstorm Of gently falling leaves Treading majestically through the leaves Is a magnificent, male, red deer His melancholy, soulful, mating call Tells that rutting time is here It echoes to the river, where a hint of a splash Forms rings, as the salmon rise And from their homes in the bank, sand martins dart To feast on insects and flies While across in the meadow, profuse with blooms Rabbits and field mice run free As butterflies dance from flower to flower To the drone of bumble bees And in a patchwork landscape of fertile fields Both sheep and cattle laze Sleepy, from having eaten their fill Of the lush, fecund, grass they graze As I take a stroll through these idyllic scenes It leaves me breathless, with no words to say On how anything can ever, be compared To the beauty of an autumn day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/26/2011 10:14:00 PM
A walk in nature, and congrats for your poems going thru round one. Way to go!
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Date: 3/8/2011 1:55:00 AM
Awesome! Congrats!
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Date: 12/14/2010 8:14:00 AM
so wonderfully expressed Janette. Full of great imagery of an Autumn day. Congrats on your feature...Lay
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Date: 12/14/2010 4:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Janette. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/12/2010 4:44:00 PM
Congrats Janette on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a wonderful one to share with us all with luv..
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Date: 11/25/2010 10:10:00 AM
Great imagery in your poem. Thank you for the nice comments on my featured poen, The Hem. Sheila
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Date: 10/10/2010 7:24:00 PM
What wonderful imagery, Janette! That red deer would take my breath away. So many beautiful sights and sounds of fall incorporated into this lovely poem. Great work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/10/2010 5:16:00 PM
I think you captured nearly every aspect of nature on a fine autumn day, Janette. Wonderful. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/10/2010 3:58:00 PM
What a splendid poem, Janette! Enjoyed the read of each stanza! And thank you for your congrats. Have a nice week! All the best!...Gert
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Date: 10/8/2010 6:42:00 PM
What a nice write on the autumn we are going to say goodbye shortly, Jenette
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Date: 10/8/2010 12:02:00 PM
A truly wonderful write...for autumn!! The best season ever....Peace, love, Audrey.
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Date: 10/8/2010 12:01:00 PM
Very descriptive and expressive write that you have penned...I am glad that I chose this one to read today..You have some orginal ideas that describes autumn that made me feel as if I was there..Sara
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Date: 10/8/2010 11:24:00 AM
Hey Rock chic you rock !!!! This is lovelly really enjoyed you have another glass of wine for that one x sarah your partner in rock ha ha x
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Date: 10/8/2010 10:46:00 AM
Beautifully written verse! I enjoyed the read. I think Autumn is my favorite time of the year with all the colors and sounds. Caryl
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Date: 10/8/2010 10:20:00 AM
Janette, you have captured Autumn so splendidly in this rhyme. It's great to see you back posting on the Soup > Have a lovely weekend Rock Chic >> James :)
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