Autumn Dawdles

Pigments of orange and crimson, fade with the last migrating duck. And barren soil littered with death: stripped of its grandeur, turns to muck. Autumn dawdles well past its end; no longer painting leaves with light. And as scarlet inks the sunset, twilight slowly morphs into night. Absorbent sponges, clouds of grey blotter icy blue skies away. And like a curtain of black smoke, shadows stealthily shadow day. Bare branches rattle in the wind, contemplating the coming snow. And clinging to the horizon, daylight's sticky fingers: let go.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gauthier Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 12:09 PM
Sweet, Emile.
Vaso Avatar
November 17, 2016 at 10:31 PM
Many poems lament the arrival of winter, I like how this poem invited winter in! Great write Emile, hope you doing well!
Pinet Avatar
November 18, 2016 at 11:18 AM
Thanks Arthur, I appreciate your time, I'm doing ok most days... thanks for your concern. Emile.
Allison Avatar
November 17, 2016 at 11:03 AM
what wonderful personification and vivid imagery. Emile this is absolutely delightful - I adore this time of year and you have depicted it so beautifully:-) hugs jan xx
Pinet Avatar
November 17, 2016 at 12:25 PM
Thanks so much Jan, I truly appreciate you taking the time to give me such encouraging comments. Emile.
Sands Avatar
November 17, 2016 at 10:27 AM
This poem is amazing. Excellent writing. Great imagery. I really enjoyed it.
Pinet Avatar
November 17, 2016 at 10:48 AM
Thanks so much Heidi, I truly appreciate your comments. Emile.
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